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Re: .
Hey there! Isha here to review. And I'm with Baal on that I hate reviewing grammar, but I'm going to do it for this piece again anyway. Unlike Baal, though, ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: Cupid
Hey there, Isha here for a review. This piece is... interesting, but I can't fairly judge how entertaining it is, because I've never been a fan of horror. As far ...
Apr 18, 2014 -
Re: .
Hey there! Isha here for a review :) Now, you've got a really neat piece here. I love the story line, and the female heroine, and all of that jazz, ...
Apr 16, 2014 -
Re: Sonnet of a untrusting lover.
YOU TRIED A SONNET. And I must say, it's not bad for your first attempt. Not bad at all (I personally fail miserably at sonnets. I've tried). And, well, I ...
Apr 16, 2014 -
Re: Yes, we are aware that your family is obnoxious.
Hey there! Isha here for a review. You know, this is going to be a really lame review because I can't quite wrap my head around what you've got here. ...
Apr 16, 2014 -
Re: The Two Thieves - Prologue
Hey there! Isha here to review. First off: Notes on works are definitely allowed! :) Second off, the review. Now, what you've got here is intensely interesting. Your narrator was ...
Apr 11, 2014 -
Re: Grace
IGGY GOSH DARN IT. The amount of feels in my chest right now is overwhelming. But I figured that I should attempt to review for you since, you know, you've ...
Apr 11, 2014 -
Re: A Guide To Males - Lesson 2: The Guy
Hey there! Here for part two. Okay, so honestly, I sympathize a lot more with Duane right now. Being queer myself, I know for a fact that that's really not ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: A Guide To Males - Lesson 1: The Basics
Hey there! Isha here for a review. Dude, okay, so this was actually kind of really hilarious. The narrator's voice is stupendously crisp and clear, and seems to get her ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: Narcissistic reflections on myself.
Hey there! Here for a valiant attempt at a review. Okay, so I definitely like this piece more than I like the last piece I commented on (I do believe ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: She Will Be Judged Chapter 1
Hey there! Isha here for a review :) First of all, whoa. You were right when you said that this would be disturbing. I kind of had my eyebrows furrowed ...
Apr 9, 2014 -
Re: A Society Story
Hey there! Isha here for a review :) The message in this poem was definitely strong, especially towards the end when you're talking about how the father never needed to ...
Apr 9, 2014 -
Re: I Don't Want to be Your Princess
Hey there! Isha here for a review :) And I'm going to say, right here and right now, that I really liked your last stanza. In the whole poem, it ...
Apr 9, 2014 -
Re: Not Invisible - Chapter I
Hey there! isha here to review. Okay, so, this is actually a really freaking cool concept. I mean, I've seen stuff about invisible people before, but I always like it ...
Apr 8, 2014 -
Re: The House of Sand-- Chapter 1 Part 1
Hey there! Here to review as requested. And this might be short, because I couldn't really find much to nitpick or pull apart. The only things that I have to ...
Apr 5, 2014