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Re: me, the robot
Hello there. I'm Ehte, here for the review. I can totally agree with the reviewers from above. There is no structure to it. Well, it's free verse so I didn't ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: untitled (open to suggestions)
Hello there. I'm Ehte, here for the review. Where are the punctuation marks? Add punctuation marks to it. Without them your poem is like a single line. They are a ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Escape (or Wings, which one do you think is better?)
Hello there. I'm Ehte here for the review. You could use Wings as the title as Gsp said but I have a title of my own which is "Sometimes". XD ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Empty Mind
Hello there. So you were facing the terrible W.B when you wrote this? If yes, then it is a good way to get rid of it. Your imagery is great ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Just let me be
Hello there. I'm Ehte here for the review. Without any delay I shall get down to the review/ I'm short for my age but I try to stand tall When ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: The Deranged Bibliophile
Hello there. I'm Ehte, here for the review. The imagery used in your poem is really good. The first two stanzas did not rhyme at all but then the rest ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: When life s***s on you with bricks
Hello there. You have a got a nice poem over here. The imagery you used in you piece was good but it could have been better. But the poem did ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: That one winter by the fire;
Hello there. I guess the experiment was successful for you if you take the formatting and repetitions into consideration. Other than that, it was not so good. There was no ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Hello Lele. I'm here for the review. When I first saw the title of the poem I thought that it is going to be some kind of gross or gory ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Based On a Dream.....
Hello there. I am here for the review as asked. It is a good piece with good use of words and imagery but it would be better if you had ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
Hello there. I loved this poem a lot. You have got great imagery. A perfect flow with great rhyming skills. And no grammatical mistakes as much as i can see ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: My heart
Hello there. It was a good piece of poetry and i liked it too but it had no flow. And please do add some punctuations to your poem. It would ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Dry Rain
Hello there. I did not find it to be much of a poem. It was just a story chopped down to be into stanzas so that it looks like one. ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Skin
Hello there. This is a perfectly simple enjoyable poem and also has a good message in it but that one thing that bothered everyone else, that bothered me too. Apples, ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: The Silent Laughter
Hello there. I'm Ehte here for the review. The little boy came out to play, And immediately wished he hadn't. A good start. The giant bullies darted towards him; giant ...
Mar 27, 2011