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Hello there, VEE. OMG!! This poem had a terribly awesome flow throughout. xD Totally deserves a like. *likes* And the content was related to every teenager living now. Every teenager ...

Hello there, PuffyWuffy!! I had this poem in my reading list for a long time so I finally decided to give it a look. Yet another good poem by ya! ...

Hello there. Heres' the review. We both said we always wanted to be friends But I knew, deep down, I could never see you as anything But a traitor The ...

Hello there. Why is it i only fall Why is it that, only I fall? Yet everytime i do i hear a call Yet every time I do, I hear ...

Hello there. It felt much like a song rather than a poem. I'm not saying that it should be in the lyric section and stuff but I just felt that ...

Hello there. I liked this piece a lot. After reading, it felt like much of a prose piece rather than a poem to me but the strong storyline made everything ...

Hello there. The idea of the poem was good. But I think it could have been more properly executed. It felt as if these were some random lines about life ...

Hello there. Honestly speaking. I did not like this. I’m sorry. It has an excess of grammatical mistakes. When I say excess I mean EXCESS. Do you use notepad for ...

Hello there. Your material was good. Well thought of but it got trashed by the forced rhymes. Do not give rhymes the first and the main priority. Just let things ...

There's a lump in my throat that just won't go Away Keep away in the previous line itself. Goes with the flow and the rhyme. No matter how much I ...

Hello there. I'm sorry to say but I think that this poem was a big lump of cliches. Except the Listen part. You need to lengthen it a bit and ...

I can't hack this water straight off my back, Ruthless and shameless, no more talkin' back, Take what you say and try to act, Rutheless and shameless, no more talkin' ...

I crave only melt on the tongue A bit confusing! I think you missed out some words. Sweets and high fructose corn syrup Colors ranging in pinks to blues To ...

Hello there. This is a very good poem and I love it. I liked your concept and it had a good flow to it but the rhymes were forced at ...

Hello there, Freak. Cool concept. A pilgrimage to find love, eh? Very original and new. I have a read on this same thing. It was written by Paulo Coelho. It ...