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Re: Somme
Brutal and Breathtaking..... The story behind it is very touching.... I could feel the emotions felt by the father towards his son... Very well written.... Awesome.... Keep up the good ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Love II (Rebellion)
A very good piece... It invokes raw emotions and i love it how you have conveyed the whole story.... AWESOME.... I would relate to all the teen guys out there... ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Life Without You
BRAVO.... You really have some talent if you wrote it at the age of ten.... I like it a lot.... I would to sing along if someone sets the right ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: An Insight Into A Teenager's Mind
Wonderful... It surely does relate to me and to every teen out there.... Great rhythm and a perfect flow.... I wish i could write like you can.... Keep writing... :) ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Argument of the Fried Brains
BRAVO An original idea and a very good one i must say.... Well written and good use of words but at some places i saw the flow breaking.... All in ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Rejection
It is a good piece.... You don't need to give hyphens when you are breaking one line into two it isn't necessary.... The ending is quite good.... I don't see ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: Guided (Introduction)
WOW... If its the prologue of your upcoming novel then it is just awesome.... :D I got some things to tell you like its "banshee's cry"..... ;) And better omit ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: The Passing Time
This is one great piece... It quite well describes the whole day which a normal human being passes everyday.... The poem has a good rhythm and a perfect flow.... How ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: An Education Worth Paying For
This is a very good piece... A very original and different type of idea.... I must say one thing that it isn't necessary to start each line with a capital ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Unknown Blues
You have some rare talent.... :D To write such a wonderful poem when one is bored is a big deal... Great rhythm and i perfect flow.... Great work hun... :D ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: A Boy and His Violin
Hi... It was a good piece... Very well versed and rhymed in a good flow... I could imagine the boy playing the violin in front of me.... Some nitpicks Because ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: help with grammar/structure of poems?
Hey... An interesting story you got there dear... You don't need to think about the flow mate... A poem is also a poem if it doesn't rhyme or if it ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: You (Without) Me.
Hey... If this is one of your first poems then i must say you get hell lot of talent stuffed inside of you... Great work with the rhyming... Its so ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Trying to Write a Poem.
Yes you on the write track buddy.... And it is the best track ever made... :D You have a very good talent of rhyming everything you want... Keep up the ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Casting shadows
Its Lovely... :D Could not much figure out what the creature is but it doesn't matter because i liked the way you presented it... And it gave me the chills... ...
Jan 8, 2011