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Hello hibalyazidi! And welcome (slightly late) to YWS! The idea about the comparison of life in reality and in our heads is quite popular and understandable to most people since ...

Here to get this out of the green room! :) You describe Caspar as a caring man who cherished those people close to him very much, including his wife, Beverly. ...

Hello Rathat! I’m happy to be reviewing your most recent chapter. This seems to be the breaking point where all the emotions which Adrianna tried to suppress finally erupt, making ...

Alright! Chapter Four! The slow pace of this chapter is definitely what was needed in order for Cassandra to mature emotionally and for us, readers, to get to know the ...

Hello Alice! I believe this is my first time reviewing one of your works. It was great pleasure to read this story. Indeed, it is fairy tale-like in its atmosphere ...

Hello! I saw this in the Green Room I found this poem to be heartfelt and sincere. The use of "we" rather than "I" throughout this poem gives it the ...

Hello Ashen! And welcome to YWS! The rose is a good example of an image that stays the same through the whole poem, and I really liked how the emotions ...

Hello @creeperfeverdreams! I love reading your stuff! The connection between Emberlynn and Juniper was my favorite part. Even in the face of such chaos, it is natural for Emberlynn to ...

Hi there! Saw this in the green room. The wordplay is brilliant, and the spoken word quality that it has makes the poem stand out. "They look in the middle ...

Instead of creating drama around the moment, the writer allows the happiness to convey the message, which is why I think it works well. There are many times where a ...

Team Egg! 🥚 It feels like the story is opening in an amazing way. Chapter 4 was full of action, while Chapter 5 managed to slow the pace just a ...

Hi! Reviewing for Team Egg! The character that completely stole the show for me was Ceciliana. When she began to speak, it took me by surprise, and from thereon I ...

Chapter Three! Very excited! 🥚 What surprised me the most was the lack of any spectacular action scenes but the fact that I haven't been bored even once during the ...

Because I reviewed Chapter Two, I thought I might as well do Chapter One. Characters are described in a very natural way. The plot of the mystery is intriguing but ...

I loved reading this second chapter of yours. Given the excellent introduction you've done in Chapter One, I think that the development of mystery in the second chapter is excellent ...