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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Dragon's Vale (Chapter 3) - WIP Novella, won't be updated for a while

    Me again! What I liked about this chapter is that it introduces Kademos as an enemy more thoroughly and shows how much he is ready to do to reach his ...

    Sep 2
  • Article / Essay » Literature, Culture Re: On the American Dream: The Lighthouse & Of Mice and Men

    This is an excellent analytical essay that provides a thorough and insightful comparison of The Lighthouse and Of Mice and Men . This comparison is quite natural because of the ...

    Aug 31
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Science Fiction Re: TEETH / 2018: chapter 2

    Hello! Heads-up in advance — I have not read Chapter One (and I probably shouldn’t because it’s rated 16+ 😬) but the cover and the title really jumped out to ...

    Aug 30
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Reflection

    Hello! This poem seems very personal and self-reflection oriented. The way that "I can't feel it / The emotion isn't mine" is used here really works because of how it ...

    Aug 29
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Dragon's Vale (Chapter 2) - WIP Novella (won't be updated for a while)

    I enjoyed this chapter because it continues expanding the world and moving closer to the final destination of Tauth and Serafina, which is Havenock. The conversation of Tauth and Serafina ...

    Aug 28
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Dragon's Vale (Chapter 1) - WIP Novella; won't be updated for a while)

    Hello again, Dom! I loved how in Chapter One the tranquil ambiance of Valeford quickly turned into an intriguing story. It was clear from the start that there was something ...

    Aug 27
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Dragon's Vale (Prologue) - WIP Novella; won't be updated for a while)

    It was quite enjoyable to see how a vivid atmosphere of the place was created in this chapter. There is something in Valeford that reminds of a village with a ...

    Aug 26
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Other Re: Luna’s story-Zombies of Mariesville

    The eerie feeling in this work was something I liked, especially the combination of Luna being entertained by the cartoon and Helena coming out of the walls. The connection between ...

    Aug 25
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: God of Time

    I really enjoyed how this poem managed to make an everyday experience of watching a clock turn into an existential discussion of fate, time and man. The evolution of shapes ...

    Aug 23
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 5

    Hiiii! Chapter Five does a remarkable job in continuing the themes from Chapter Four and complicating the relationship between Raven and Dylan. For instance, I enjoyed that after their talk, ...

    Aug 22
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 4

    The lake scene provides Raven and Dylan with a quite rare opportunity to have a calm conversation without any quarrels. This statement about him bringing Raven there because he is ...

    Aug 22
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: The Portrait.

    This piece had an interesting angle to it. The fact that the narrator wakes up in an art gallery creates a mysterious atmosphere right away since the reader is not ...

    Aug 21
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Other Re: Monika’s origin-Siren’s Desire

    I especially appreciate the atmosphere of mystery in this opening. The idea of a tiny coastal town called Moon's Beach due to the reflected moonlight on the ocean already makes ...

    Aug 20
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: A Freind's smile

    This poem impressed me with its theme: the transition from isolation to acquiring confidence and friendships. From the very first lines, the reader learns about the isolation of the character ...

    Aug 19
  • Script » Other, General Re: WITH HOPE AND HELP FROM HONEY

    I enjoyed the main theme of this play, especially in terms of the impact of the kindness of grandma Honey, who still affects Leo even when she passes away. It ...

    Aug 18


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— Mark Twain