dragonrider

First off, I liked this poem. I can really relate to it.... However, I believe some of your grammar is off. Also, the flow of the poem and the sentences ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I don't really have anything to criticize. I think that this is a very relatable poem for people. There was a really good beat, and ...

To be honest, I don't review a lot of poems, but I'll do my best. One thing that bothered me was the switching of tenses. You started the poem out ...

I found this story to be very interesting, and I would definitely want to read more. "He asked, confused. I looked up. The girl from before is gone." You switched ...

This is my absolute favorite chapter so far. You fixed a lot of issues from the other chapters. This chapter flowed really well and was much easier for me to ...

Right off the bat, I LOVED it. It was so descriptive and relatable. I don't really have anything to criticize. The only thing that I want to know--who is this ...

I think that this poem needs improvement. It seems one-dimensional and isn't very satisfying for the reader. All you're saying is that the person is lost without their special someone...but ...

This was a good piece. It's interesting to read in the villain's perspective. I don't really see anything to criticize. There were a couple places were a couple words were ...

This is a very interesting piece. It's very emotional, and feels genuine. A lot of songs nowadays are nonsense full of cuss words and aren't real. This song is different ...

This was a really good story. The beginning caught my attention right away, there were wonderful descriptions throughout the story, the action was great, and the cliff hanger ending was ...

This is definitely an interesting piece. Each chapter is better than the last chapter. There is a little issue that I would like to address...There are several places where sentences ...

This is an incredible poem. It's just...wow! I can't find any flaws with this. So I'll just tell you everything that I liked about your poem. First off, I love ...

To start off, I found your story interesting....I found it to be very mysterious, and it piqued my interest. I liked the idea of putting criminals together and fight to ...

What's up with all the commas??? They were really distracting and made it very difficult to focus on the story. The organization and grammar need a lot of help. The ...

I loved this poem! There was so much detail, descriptions, and imagery! It was amazing!!!(yes, I'm aware that I'm putting a lot of exclamation points....). There were nice transitions, and ...