dragonight9

Thanks so much for taking a look at my story. I hope you enjoyed.

Thanks so much for your compliments. I'm literally grinning as I write this, lol.

I love your idea of using paint instead of stickers. I do have some modern technology in the form of lost artifacts but stickers makes less sense now that I ...

Thanks again for your comments. I like how you mentioned I should describe Ash regaining her confidence. Especially in the mental plane I need to do this. So I went ...

Thanks for your reviews! I'll get to the rest of them later, but I really enjoyed reading it. When Ash refers to Shadow in the third person, it was meant ...

I did try to give Shadow a bit more of a role after Tikaya's comments, but I'm starting to think it might be ok too. Jarid is the overprotective brother ...

Thank you for your insightful comments. Thank you for the example when pointing out this flaw. I do try to 'show not tell' but sometimes I overshare when I worry ...

I missed this review when I replied the other day. I'll respond now with my thoughts. I get that the mind scenes are a bit confusing. I'll say what I ...

Thanks for all your comments. They've been really helpful. I've commented on it a few times in previous Wings that Shadow is keeping his powers hidden, but at this point ...

Hi again! I went back and made some modifications based off what you said on Dragon anatomy. I will say that they are warm blooded creatures in this series (for ...

Hi Niteowl! Thanks so much for the review! I liked a lot of your comments and I will most likely go back and adjust a lot of the mental dialogue ...

Thanks for your advice! I looked back and added a bit more of a reaction when Shadow's friends are put down by Bellum. Though I also want to give the ...

So good to see you again! :) And thanks for all the compliments. I really wanted Bellum to seem trustworthy to Shadow while you (the reader) knows he may have ...

Thank you so much for your compliments and advice. As for those comments, Yes Shadow has resisted Bellum in previous chapters and is only now fully giving in. Second, about ...

Again, I made some edits to the things you mentioned (particularly the first few) A lot of the dialogue you were hoping for in this chapter, I have Jarid and ...