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Wow! This was awesome! I love how you used a real life experience like this. I've always found that your own experiences create the most passionate and enjoyable poetry. Most ...

Hi, I know this story already has a lot of reviews but I just had to talk about it since I love scenes like this so much. I won't mention ...

Yay! Another chapter of Wetfire! It felt like you rushed this one a bit and there were quite a few places that could have used more detail. Silver and Snowfall's ...

Hi, I was expecting the man to be down for the count but now we've got a whole bar fight to deal with. I love the way you described this ...

Oof! Straight through his skull? Dang, she's even stronger than I initially thought. Killing the guy wasn't that surprising I guess. He did kind of deserve it after all. (unless ...

This is a very interesting take on poetry. I have a few comments about the use of new lines and spaces in between, though I want to preface this with ...

Well, this was not what I was expecting after that prologue. Interesting concept and a futuristic feel that I really enjoyed. I love how it seemed so similar and yet ...

Great story. I really liked the message of this and it encouraged me. If you want some advice about your writing and style then this is what I have to ...

Cool story. I'm new here, what does LMSVI stand for? or is it LMS 6? I really liked the description in this story. It definitely gave off a cosmic scale ...

Wow. I mean really. Wow. As a Christian myself this really rocked me. I can't help but wonder what inspired you to write this. It has a true demonic feel ...

Even more intrigue. Good build up. This was great. Even more character building for Silver. Tsk, tsk for lying though. Lol. The grammar seemed a bit off in a few ...

Just gotta say I love how you crossed out heroic and replaced it with stupid at the start. (How did you do that?!) I like the rivalry Silver has with ...

Wow! So much is happening all of a sudden. Doesn't it just be like that sometimes though? Silver hasn't even gotten the chance to process her vision before all this ...

Well that was unexpected! Just like all the other reviews I want to mention how this really changes the scale of this story. Up until now I thought this was ...

Hmmm... Nope. Can't see why Glory recommended them either. Nice story. I like that when Silver was distressed she went to clear her mind and talk with someone about it. ...