dragonight9

This is a very interesting take on poetry. I have a few comments about the use of new lines and spaces in between, though I want to preface this with ...

Well, this was not what I was expecting after that prologue. Interesting concept and a futuristic feel that I really enjoyed. I love how it seemed so similar and yet ...

Great story. I really liked the message of this and it encouraged me. If you want some advice about your writing and style then this is what I have to ...

Cool story. I'm new here, what does LMSVI stand for? or is it LMS 6? I really liked the description in this story. It definitely gave off a cosmic scale ...

Wow. I mean really. Wow. As a Christian myself this really rocked me. I can't help but wonder what inspired you to write this. It has a true demonic feel ...

Even more intrigue. Good build up. This was great. Even more character building for Silver. Tsk, tsk for lying though. Lol. The grammar seemed a bit off in a few ...

Just gotta say I love how you crossed out heroic and replaced it with stupid at the start. (How did you do that?!) I like the rivalry Silver has with ...

Wow! So much is happening all of a sudden. Doesn't it just be like that sometimes though? Silver hasn't even gotten the chance to process her vision before all this ...

Well that was unexpected! Just like all the other reviews I want to mention how this really changes the scale of this story. Up until now I thought this was ...

Hmmm... Nope. Can't see why Glory recommended them either. Nice story. I like that when Silver was distressed she went to clear her mind and talk with someone about it. ...

Wooo! Can't wait to read another one of your stories, and this looked so well done too! I just finished the last chapter of Accidental magic and I must say ...

Is this the end of the story? Looks like there are a few more things to wrap up and a conclusion to give the characters some closure. Again, the first ...

Well, that's an interesting take on death. Really cool description. Makes me wonder what, if anything, inspired it. Interesting concept too. I have so many questions about how it works. ...

Wow. Charlotte didn't really seem to care all that much about being stabbed. More like... annoyed. She really would just rather go home than be stabbed by her sister's new ...

I enjoyed the story behind this poem and it wasn't nearly as confusing as some poetry I've read. I am not an avid poet but here are a few things ...