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Re: Bounty hunter, prolugue
Goody good!
Apr 19, 2009 -
Re: My Fire (edited)
Wow. Um...yeah. That was...inteeresting. But it does need work. not spelling work, but the actual story needs to be worked on. think about it for a little while longer. then ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Mary, The Obedience Fairy - [Part One]
Um...okay... *slowly edges away* I think this was kind of interesting, but it needs more...flaire.
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Use Your Vocal Chords...SPEAK!
Hey, Laura! I really liked it, but the part about bringing old people back confused me. *shrugs* It was still mighty good though!
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Vampires and Lycans. A whole new world to the human eye.
Hey, pretty good, but a bunch of mistakes for grammer and stuff...keep at it...sorry... so...tired...
Jan 30, 2009 -
Re: Like Mother like daughter
I like it, though there we a LOT of grammer errors, like you misspelled sweet and there weren't enough commas.
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Writing's a pain.
If this is what you really believe, then you din't belong here! No! Talk to the hand!
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Logan, Necromancer Chapter two
I like it! Keep at it!
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Until death do us part
Cool. I really liked it. I just wrote a short story like this one. keep it up.
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: The Elemental Gem
I thought it was really cool, and I want to hear more!
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Deepest's Tale Part i
this story belongs in the fanfiction section of this site. put it there.
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 2 - Online Intruder
write the next chapter now
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Online Intruder
I really thought it was cool. Keep at it.
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Unspoken Words - Chapter one
uh...what? It was pretty confusing. I liked the first part, but after that, it seemed more like a diary entry. About halfway through, I stopped reading it. And htere are ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: Hunted: Part 1.1
Thanks. No, it is not my real phone number. I took a road from my town and added a number. I took my friends phone number and changed one number. ...
Dec 9, 2008