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Re: The Punishment of Atlas
This was different, but as I just told someone in a review I like different. I love this poem. Its different. So. Your grammar and spelling was great along was ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: The shapes of time
This was really... Really interesting. It was different. But I like different! I enjoyed reading the first and the last stanza. I liked them because they were just good. I ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Two different worlds
I liked it, but I think you need to make it longer and add some more excitement to it. It sounds great except for these questions. Who is the boy? ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter Two
I really liked this book! It is Awesome! I love how it is so different of all the other books. It is one of a kind. My favorite part was ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Separation
HI PUppys me. I loved your poem so... so ... So religious! I wrote my first poem and I wish u wourld read it its called pretty face ugly heart. ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: Farewell, My Darling.
This is my honest opioin, I didn't think this was the best poem ever, but I did kind of like it. I just didn't understand the plot. Was it about ...
May 9, 2014 -
Re: The Falling
This was a wonderful poem. I love how it wa religious. I really like it. But I caught a few mistakes. one: You need for lines to a stanza. If ...
May 9, 2014 -
Re: Life As A Criminal- SERIES FINALLY- Parts 9/10- Please Don't Leave!- Classic Ending.
This was awesome. I really liked it! It was the best chapter in the book. in my opion. I didn't see any mistakes in grammar or spelling. Punchuation was good. ...
May 9, 2014 -
Re: Life As A Criminal~ Parts 7/8~ Hard as Stone- I Thought We Were Friends...
I thought this book was awesome, like I said in the comment. I thought you grammar and spelling was fantastic no mistakes in this area. I thought your punctuation was ...
May 9, 2014 -
Re: Can you? Will you?
I really liked it. I loved how it was so dramatic. I didn't see any errors. No spelling or grammar errors. No punctuation errors either. I just read your other ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: Watch
I really liked your poem. I liked the effect it had and the mood. Mood is what I meant by effect if you were wondering. I thought your grammar was ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 1 - In the Mountains
Hello, dogsrule5 here to say that this book is Awesome! I really like the way you spilt up your paragraphs. Puncuation: I saw no mistakes in this catiglory Grammar: No ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: Here Be Dragons
Hi. dogsrule5 here. Listen I am not trying to be harsh, but I found a few mistakes in your poem. Here are the mistakes I noticed. One: You need stanza's ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Life As A Criminal- Part 5/6- Run, just run!!!/ Weaponry
I really liked this and I liked how she has a giant bucket of kechup in the car. This was one of the best chpaters I have read in my ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: Sky gazing
You need stanzas which spate you paragrahs you need four lines to a paragraph and also you need ot fix a lot of things one you do need some punctuation ...
May 6, 2014