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dogsrule5

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Punishment of Atlas

    This was different, but as I just told someone in a review I like different. I love this poem. Its different. So. Your grammar and spelling was great along was ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The shapes of time

    This was really... Really interesting. It was different. But I like different! I enjoyed reading the first and the last stanza. I liked them because they were just good. I ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Two different worlds

    I liked it, but I think you need to make it longer and add some more excitement to it. It sounds great except for these questions. Who is the boy? ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Forbidden Shadows - Chapter Two

    I really liked this book! It is Awesome! I love how it is so different of all the other books. It is one of a kind. My favorite part was ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Separation

    HI PUppys me. I loved your poem so... so ... So religious! I wrote my first poem and I wish u wourld read it its called pretty face ugly heart. ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Farewell, My Darling.

    This is my honest opioin, I didn't think this was the best poem ever, but I did kind of like it. I just didn't understand the plot. Was it about ...

    May 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Falling

    This was a wonderful poem. I love how it wa religious. I really like it. But I caught a few mistakes. one: You need for lines to a stanza. If ...

    May 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Life As A Criminal- SERIES FINALLY- Parts 9/10- Please Don't Leave!- Classic Ending.

    This was awesome. I really liked it! It was the best chapter in the book. in my opion. I didn't see any mistakes in grammar or spelling. Punchuation was good. ...

    May 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Life As A Criminal~ Parts 7/8~ Hard as Stone- I Thought We Were Friends...

    I thought this book was awesome, like I said in the comment. I thought you grammar and spelling was fantastic no mistakes in this area. I thought your punctuation was ...

    May 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Romantic Re: Can you? Will you?

    I really liked it. I loved how it was so dramatic. I didn't see any errors. No spelling or grammar errors. No punctuation errors either. I just read your other ...

    May 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: Watch

    I really liked your poem. I liked the effect it had and the mood. Mood is what I meant by effect if you were wondering. I thought your grammar was ...

    May 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1 - In the Mountains

    Hello, dogsrule5 here to say that this book is Awesome! I really like the way you spilt up your paragraphs. Puncuation: I saw no mistakes in this catiglory Grammar: No ...

    May 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: Here Be Dragons

    Hi. dogsrule5 here. Listen I am not trying to be harsh, but I found a few mistakes in your poem. Here are the mistakes I noticed. One: You need stanza's ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Life As A Criminal- Part 5/6- Run, just run!!!/ Weaponry

    I really liked this and I liked how she has a giant bucket of kechup in the car. This was one of the best chpaters I have read in my ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sky gazing

    You need stanzas which spate you paragrahs you need four lines to a paragraph and also you need ot fix a lot of things one you do need some punctuation ...

    May 6, 2014


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