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Re: Chapter 1- A New Fairytale
Hey, Dogsrule5 here for a review! Overall, I loved the idea of this story! I love the idea of prince charming finding a new life and creating a new fairytale. ...
Apr 9, 2021 -
Re: Cortez Shivick( Chapter 1)
Hello! Dogsrule5 here for a review! I haven’t reviewed in a long while, but I still hope you find it helpful, even though if it’s not as in depth as ...
Feb 17, 2021 -
Re: I Wish You Keep Living
Hey Dogsrule5 here for a review! I am speechless. Wow! This story really grasps the idea of judgement, and is portrayed nicely throughout the story! I feel for the characters ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: The Mewer
Hey Dogsrule5 here for a review! First off I'm going to start off by saying that I think you have a great start to the story and I'm excited to ...
Mar 28, 2020 -
Re: Lows I
Hey! Dogsrule5 here for a review! I'm going to start off by saying that this was a really good start to a story! I like the descriptions and details of ...
Mar 28, 2020 -
Re: Dystopia-Chapter 1
Hey Dogsrule5 here for a review! I came across this novel while scanning through the dramatic books section and it caught my eye! First off let me note, the first ...
Jan 17, 2020 -
Re: Home
Hey! Dogsrule5 here for a review! Let me start off by saying that I loved this poem, and the vibe it put off! It made me feel cozy and warm ...
Nov 18, 2019 -
Re: Anxiety
Hey, Dogs here for a review! I'm a little late, but WELCOME TO YWS! My name is Dogsrule5 but feel free to call me Dogs! I know you'll just love ...
Mar 10, 2019 -
Re: This World Part one
Wow! This poem was really good, and I think it will help people realize that our world needs to change. We let people suffer for our own happiness and that's ...
Oct 4, 2018 -
Re: This could be Heaven
Hey Dogs here for a review! I loved this poem, it was beautifully written, but I have a thing to point out! sent should be spelled scent. The word sent ...
Sep 24, 2018 -
Re: Life or Death
Hey! Great poem, I really liked it! In one spot I noticed the flow was a bit off, but that might've just be out I read it! Also a nitpick ...
Sep 9, 2018 -
Re: Falling Rain
Hey, Dogs here for a review! So first off, I'd like to say that this poem is good, and I really liked it, but I have some suggestions for you ...
Sep 4, 2018 -
Re: Something Weird and Random: Poetry
Hey, Dogs here for a review! So this poem was really good, but there were a few errors I'm going to point out to you to help you in the ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: High Seas (Part One)
Hey, Dogs here to review! In this poem, your rhyming scheme was spot on! I haven't read many poems where the rhyme scheme was perfect with the flow of the ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: Deleted
Hey Dogs here for a review! First off this was a really good start to a story, but I have a few errors and suggestions to point out! Errors All ...
Aug 25, 2018