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Re: How Am I To...
Hello there Broken! Dogs here with your review today. Well interesting piece you have here, you take the topic down a new path other than the usual conventional love heart ...
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Re: You look like gold to me
Helllooooo Indi! Dogs here with your review. Well well well my goodness gracious! Look at this piece of just excellent. You do a wondrous job of using great description words ...
Mar 23, 2013 -
Re: She Wears Embers like Rubies
Hello there Cole my fine feathered fellow! Dogs here with your review today. Well well well, congratulations on being the first person to post your submitted short story for my ...
Mar 23, 2013 -
Re: Those who cannot speak revised
Hello there Arianna! Terribly sorry for getting to you on time with this review! Anywho, I really love reading your writing :) I do hope you continue sending me links ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: A Rapist's Note.
Hello there Toes! Dogs here with your review as requested :). I just realized that your name actually is "Toe," but I think "Toes" just rings better, do you mind ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: The Porcelain Doll
Hello there Jade! Dogs here with your review as requested :). Most of this review will be focused on the word choice and how to help with the flow and ...
Mar 18, 2013 -
Re: Knitting A Story and Writing A Scarf
Hello there Kay! Tucker here once again with your review today :). Well, I must say that the topic of this poem is among one of the most creative that ...
Mar 16, 2013 -
Re: Lights: Chapter One
Hello there Half! Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, to start things off: WELCOME TO YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here. I'm Tucker, and if you ...
Mar 16, 2013 -
Re: ice pincess
Hello there Soul! Dogs here with your review today. Ok, pay close attention to Wind's review, because he has a lot of good stuff that you should take heed to. ...
Mar 16, 2013 -
Re: Harriets Garden
"Tears cascaded down her cheeks leaving white trails through..." Howdy Black! Dogs here with your review today. I really like this line, great use of the word "cascaded." On a ...
Mar 16, 2013 -
Re: This story was brought to you by the conservative mother's union
"Her eyes were shining and her exquisite" Hello there Unconsoled! Dogs here with your review today :). Nice way to start here and throw us right into the action. When ...
Mar 15, 2013 -
Re: An Altercation
Hello there Kat! Dogs here with your review today. Well goodness gracious here is an epic poem you produced. You use some excellent description in this piece that really drags ...
Mar 15, 2013 -
Re: The Diaries Of A Tortured Soul
Hello there Toe! Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, I'm glad you're stepping outside of your usual writing zone to create a free verse style poem :). I'm ...
Mar 15, 2013 -
Re: I Need You
Hello there Annebale! Dogs here with your review today! Play close attention to Llama's and Umaima reviews. They have some really important stuff that you need to throw in here ...
Mar 15, 2013 -
Re: The Rose
Hello there Geek! Dogs here with your review today! I noticed that you're relatively new here to YWS so WELCOME TO YWS! Let me know if you ever need a ...
Mar 15, 2013
