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Hello there Gummie! Dogs here with your review. To start I think your avatar is cute :). Anywho back to the point, I think this is a good poem with ...

Hello there roses! Dogs here with your review today. Ok, interesting idea for a poem here, but to be honest the topic of love is incredibly worn out and overused. ...

Hello Drew! Dogs here with your review today! ok so this is a nice piece, certainly a little bit of an overused topic but you put a new spin on ...

"Di Hannah... DCI Vile" Ok at this point you don't need the "Di" and the "DCI" any more, because you've already established who these people are and we know them. ...

Hello there Lylas! Dogs here with your review. Ok to start off, all lyrics and poems should be properly formatted, right now you just have a series of lines that ...

Hello bookwriter! Dogs here with your review today. Ok nice topic here I always love star wars stuff. Building off of what Rydia said, you are missing a little of ...

Clydsdale should be Clydesdale. If you're trying to spell the greek god's name, it is Zeus, not Zuez. "I watched Zeuz's black and white ears flick back and finally turning ...

Howdy do Andrew! haha that rhymes :3 anywho dogs here with your review today! Ok so to get started I think you're off to an excellent start here, I like ...

Hello there guine! Dogs here with your review today :). I'm not the best at lyrics but I'll give you the best I have :). I think this is an ...

Hello there Ariana! Dogs here with your review. Ok first a quick issue about this poem is that it really isn't a poem. Poems consist of stanzas, and stanzas consist ...

Hello Leaseal! Dogs here with your review. Ok to start I think your avatar is ADORABLE!!!!! Mayybbee as cute as mine... maybe. Anywho down to buisness. Ok you have several ...

"6. 33" If you're noting time it should be "6:33" with a colon and no space. "to find my mobile" I have never heard of anyone who ever calls their ...

Hello Cspr, Dogs here with your review today! Ok interesting poem you have going on here, you use great imagery, which has been a constant problem in many pieces I've ...

Hello Canich. Dogs here with your review today. Ok before I even get into your writing I need to touch quickly on the fact that this needs some actual poetry ...

Izzykat, in my younger writing days I had lots of issues trying to come up with my own thoughtful writing that was brilliant and my own idea. I constantly heard ...