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Re: Experience
Hello there Aley! Dogs here with your review as requested. Well, lovely poem you have here, you do a great job of keeping the general comparison and theme together and ...
Apr 9, 2013 -
Re: I'm gay (But I cry alone at night)
Hello there Simba! Dogs here with your review today. Okey dokey, to start I'd pay attention to several bits of Trident's review, it has some valuable points in it. Well, ...
Apr 7, 2013 -
Re: Enter into...
Hello there Ariana! Dogs here with your review as requested. Okey dokey, interesting idea for a poem here. I see a lot of potential in your writing of this with ...
Apr 6, 2013 -
Re: The Millennial Ch. 4 (Pt. 1/2)
"dead of tragedy" You can be dead from tragedy, I'm not sure how you can be "dead of tragedy." Unless you're trying to say they have no tragedy in their ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: Alice's Conversations in Starbucks: The Mad Coffee-Party
Hello there Jash! Dogs here with your review today. Well congratulations on being the second person to submit to my short story contest! Do keep in mind that because every ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: Well, This is Awkward
"comstricted my biceps" I think you mean "constricted" here. "everyone has to fight for their prize" I love this line, it really sets the tone for the story. You also ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Perspective
Hello there Jade! Dogs here with your review today! As always, it is beyond exhilarating to read your poem because it is always rather amusing. But this... this is certainly ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Someone
Hello there Kell! Dogs here with your review today. Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay here, I'm Tucker. If you need anything: Help, a review, advice. Let ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Through the Portal
Hello there Man! Dogs here with your review today! Wonderful poem here, I really love your formatting and message that you use in this poem. Some really just wonderful lines, ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: I Never Knew
Hello there band! Dogs here with your review today! I think you make some excellent points in this poem and you have some really wonderful lines. The third stanza is ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: For YWS Competition {Also give it a TITLE}
Hello there Animal! Dogs here with your review today. Lovely poem start you have here. Interesting idea and you really take it to a cool spin. To start I think ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: The Bus Stop Chronicles! Part 1
"Beside her, her best friend" Howdy Mag! Dogs here wit your review today. Okey dokey, quick note here: In this line the "her her" right next to each other sounds ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: An Angel's Lullaby
Hello there Ariana! Dogs here with your review as requested :). Well well well! I'd say this my be my favorite of your poems that I've read yet! You have ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Love Limbo
Hello there Lyss! Dogs here with your review today. Well lovely poem you have here, your vocab usage is beyond excellent and you do a great job use a philosophy ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Then Unknown Planet: Prologue.
"there but these animals on this planet" Howdy Jordin my friend, Dogs here with your review. Okey dokey, a couple quick things, firstly there should be a comma after "there." ...
Mar 31, 2013