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dm74

  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Stoner

    This makes me tbink about not judging someone based on their cover - or in this case based on the covers of who they choose to associate with.

    Mar 30, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Back when things were good...

    I have a ton of romance poetry in my book Unspoken Melodies. I'd love for you to read that and tell me what you think!

    Mar 27, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Shades of Love

    I told my friend I was in love with her. The backstory is in my book, Unspoken Melodies. She doesn't love me in that way and I got emotional. After ...

    Mar 26, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Misunderstood? Continued

    Thank you for the feedback! I mostly write poetry and I%u2019m not used to writing fiction and wanted to try something new. I love the feedback and will try to ...

    Mar 23, 2024
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Misunderstood?

    Hi! Thank you for the feedback. There%u2019s a continuation! I might add more too!

    Mar 23, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: ​Something I need to confess.

    Well this poem has sort of a frantic tone to it. Was that what you were going for?

    Mar 20, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Trauma

    Thank you for the review! I was actually going for more of a spoken-word poem with this one! Most of my poems are intended to be free-verse though!

    Mar 19, 2024
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: I Will Always Stand by You

    This is a great piece and it gives hope to the person or people that the narrator is speaking to. I love the repetition of "I will always be here ...

    Mar 19, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: My First Poem Ever

    Thank you! So a little bit of a background: I was being punished when I wrote this. I told my mom to shut up so my parents sent me to ...

    Mar 18, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: ***

    of course!

    Mar 18, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Nothing is wrong

    I've felt like this many times. Nothing is wrong, but at the same time, everything is wrong. When I feel like this I write, which I feel is what you ...

    Mar 15, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Are we alone?

    I love the repetition throughout the poem!

    Mar 14, 2024


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