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Re: Stoner
This makes me tbink about not judging someone based on their cover - or in this case based on the covers of who they choose to associate with.
Mar 30, 2024 -
Re: Back when things were good...
I have a ton of romance poetry in my book Unspoken Melodies. I'd love for you to read that and tell me what you think!
Mar 27, 2024 -
Re: Shades of Love
I told my friend I was in love with her. The backstory is in my book, Unspoken Melodies. She doesn't love me in that way and I got emotional. After ...
Mar 26, 2024 -
Re: Misunderstood? Continued
Thank you for the feedback! I mostly write poetry and I%u2019m not used to writing fiction and wanted to try something new. I love the feedback and will try to ...
Mar 23, 2024 -
Re: Misunderstood?
Hi! Thank you for the feedback. There%u2019s a continuation! I might add more too!
Mar 23, 2024 -
Re: ​Something I need to confess.
Well this poem has sort of a frantic tone to it. Was that what you were going for?
Mar 20, 2024 -
Re: Trauma
Thank you for the review! I was actually going for more of a spoken-word poem with this one! Most of my poems are intended to be free-verse though!
Mar 19, 2024 -
Re: I Will Always Stand by You
This is a great piece and it gives hope to the person or people that the narrator is speaking to. I love the repetition of "I will always be here ...
Mar 19, 2024 -
Re: My First Poem Ever
Thank you! So a little bit of a background: I was being punished when I wrote this. I told my mom to shut up so my parents sent me to ...
Mar 18, 2024 -
Re: ***
of course!
Mar 18, 2024 -
Re: Nothing is wrong
I've felt like this many times. Nothing is wrong, but at the same time, everything is wrong. When I feel like this I write, which I feel is what you ...
Mar 15, 2024 -
Re: Are we alone?
I love the repetition throughout the poem!
Mar 14, 2024