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Hi! I don't really have much of a review to make because I really like this poem. It's short and sweet and still quite deep, so that's pretty amazing. One ...

Hi! First off, I wanted to say how much this poem reminded me of those classics everyone has to read in their English class. It has the complexity of centuries-old ...

Hi! You know, I wasn't sure I wanted to involve myself into this because it's about religion and discussions and all that with religion are usually very messy, but I ...

Hi! I'll start off by saying that I was captivated as soon as I started reading. There are some typos on here and missing apostrophes (it's and its) that I ...

Hi! Let me start off by saying this poem is really lovely. Your language choices are superb and colorful, although there are some things you need to work on. For ...

Hi! God, I love this. It is simple and elegant and straightforward, but it still feels powerful and emotional. The persona you created in this is remarkable. She sounds contemplative ...

Hi! To start off, I have to say you have an incredible style to your writing. There were parts in it, however, that I am not sure how I feel ...

Hi! I liked this poem, to start off, but I do think you could work on it. First things first, you spelled "became" wrong. The good thing is that it's ...

Hi! First things first, I think that if this is a metaphorical river, not a real river, you should not need to clarify that it is. You should be able ...

Hi! First off, I love the very first stanza. You hooked me in immediately. About the topic of this poem, I feel like it is a topic explored often by ...

Hi! Let me start off by saying this poem is lovely, although I'm not sure I grasp the meaning. Your writing gave me more sentiment than it did clarity. I ...

Hi! First off, I have to say you have kind of a generic opening, especially with the word "started." Normally, I would advise against writing like that, but it sort ...

Hi! I absolutely adored this poem. I'll start off by saying the first thing that came to mind while I was reading, which was "Damn, that is some enticing imagery." ...

Hi! I really like this piece and the concept you decided to try to grasp. The poem is lovely and on point about this disorder, which I truly admire. However, ...

Hi! First off I need to say that the story starts off too quickly. There’s an information dump at the very beginning and it overshadows the present situation with the ...