demib

The poetry that i have from a couple years ago that was about death and pain was a lot better than happiness and love

This poem was definitely not one of my best but i decided to see what others think so i really dont mind you saying it sucks lol

You guessed correctly and I take no harsh feelings. Really I enjoy people telling me what is wrong with my poem and what isnt. You have no need to worry ...

Thanks!

Ya i wasnt quite sure what i wanted either but thanks for the review

I like it. Very gruesome, flows nicely. You describe zombieism very well (LOL). I have no other review other than to say... MAKE MORE DEATHS!!!! (LOL) but really it was ...

I liked it had a good flow the thought, flowing like it came from your heart. A river stream wanting to get bigger. I have nothing to say other than ...

Yes i wasnt quite sure i spelt that right. I thank you for pointing that out.

ohhh I want more Mick more more more! this is good!

I guess you can put it that way. It would be cool to make a poem about laughing at monsters. Hehehehe

Ok I will do the best i can. Thank you!

Isnt this plagerism?

Umm well i have to say.... wow Adam wow

This is soooo funny the way they answer there parents phone numbers! i mean who would not get in trouble for saying that?! i love this

hmmm lesbian love tied with a somewhat straight thing...intrestingo like i said before