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  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Friends Have Friends

    Thank you for the response! It cleared a lot up about the use of the roaches. With the final point (that I did not articulate well enough), it's definitely a ...

    Mar 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Vodka

    as someone who drank plenty of vodka before and after I wrote my review you are clearly taking a shot at, this is amusing.

    May 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Birkenau, 1945

    Lumi, I am so incredibly thankful for your reviews. I hope you're doing well.

    Apr 22, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Crab Cakes

    thank you for the review! i will revise the italicized parts, although i must say: My reviews are very brief and short, so you probably won%u2019t get as much out ...

    May 27, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Knny (No E's)

    Mundane genius.

    Feb 16, 2018
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: So, like, if I could sing people would like me?

    specificity is needed

    Feb 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy Re: petals & petals & petals & petals

    much love

    Feb 3, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: lungs crushed hearts crushed im not breathing but im alive

    why is this a review.

    Feb 3, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy Re: petals & petals & petals & petals

    Why the question marks?

    Feb 3, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Stop, Your Breaking Me

    *you're. I just had to do it.

    Jan 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Kiss Me

    What words would I change?

    Jan 3, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: twelve/seventeenths

    Hey! Thank you so much for the review! Ironically I have been trying to mess with time signatures lately with my poetry, however I lack any rhythm whatsoever, so this ...

    Dec 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: twelve/seventeenths

    Hey! First of all, thank you so much for the review on my work! I understand why specific poetry might be hard to review, but never let that be a ...

    Dec 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: bAck Bone of a maN

    helena? autumn? sigourney?

    Dec 16, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the Philosophers and the Choir

    you're my second favorite diabetic.

    Dec 16, 2017


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