defiantAuthoress

Hey there! You know how much I love this story, so I'm gonna jump straight to improvements, okay? When Shun and Kai are fighting, I would suggest shorter sentences and ...

My friend, this is great! I really do love the creation story that you have here. Is it something you came across, or did you make it yourself? Either way, ...

Wow, I love the imagery in this poem. It gives a lovely, peaceful feeling that I think is very needed in poems like these. I also love your choice of ...

Wow! This is a lovely poem. I'm quite partial to short poems, and I think that you've executed this one very well. I really love the feeling that it gives, ...

Hey there, friend! First of all, I'm quite glad that you're bringing back this story and revamping it. Otherwise, I'm going to get straight to reviewing. Personally, instead of starting ...

Wow. This is such an interesting piece. I definitely felt the regret in the poem, and there are a lot of strong lines: "there is no color grey" and "kiss ...

Wow! I really like the concept of this poem, I'm so happy that you thought of it. I also like the formatting, which actually reminds me of a poem itself. ...

Hey there! This was a pretty good start, for a song. I always feel weird reading songs when I don't know how the tune goes, but this one fared pretty ...

Hey there! This is quite a good rendition of Adam and Eve's tale. I feel like your imagery is good, and your descriptions are very straightforward and concise. It was ...

Hey there! Thanks so much for writing this poem. It's got a really powerful voice behind it, and I love all the imagery that you have. I feel like I ...

Hey there! I'm always thrilled to see poems about space; it's pretty much one of the coolest things ever, so why not document it through poetry? Anyway, onto the review. ...

Wow! I haven't read a poem with such a good free-verse rhythm in a while. I really like the way that this just rolls off the tongue. If I were ...

Wow! This is such a fun poem. It makes me smile, and all the various ways to try and get off of writer's block are super amusing. I'm glad I ...

Wow. I was blown away by this poem; usually when things are categorized under romantic, I don't give them much thought, but the title intrigued me and I wanted to ...

Wow. That's the first thing I'd like to say. People always talk about the whole "fake smile" thing, and it's definitely true, but you've executed it in a way that's ...