dasiamari

This was really good and it sounded mysterous

This was good I liked how it was just questions and it doesn't look like you sat for three hours to think of the next line it sound like it ...

This was really sad can't find any thing wrong =}

No bad thoughts for south Carolina I lived there for a long time mari just does not like it.

This was really good

I almost cried this was so good!!! :)

This was god but sopster what do you mean used to

That was really good and I and getting a differnt emotion from it than doves

there isn't really enough to talk about yet but I don't understand the title

Thanks and I did write this for a play that I am writing I would post it but there is not place.

that was okay not bad maybe a little editing

This is very good I can't really correct you on any thing Because i am not the best one for that

why write a poem about not liking writing poems there is no point

this was really good there were a few mistakes read it out loud and I am sure you will find them

that was cool Can not think of any other names (sorry) please pm or yahoo messenger me If you think of one or write anything else. *