darko.demark666

"Make sure we knew that in your story.". I don't write to explain, I write to open up our minds... Actually, you "close up" our minds. And learn to take ...

We don't have letters either, but since we're writing in English and all that, I created this poll with English grades. We have much more simple grading system: A - ...

What was that old saying? Red sky at night, sailor’s delight? Or was it take warning? Does a moon make the night red? 1. I would definitely remove at least ...

Be serious.

---Oh, good and bad are not equal. If they were they would both be called "good" or both "evil". I meant to say that evil aren't just evil. Even crooks ...

Okay..................nice try. Since this is not poetry, I will not review it.

Flashing lights, and shops galore Why would you put a comma before "and"!? Actually, I checked and the comma before "and" is correct. But it's also correct if you don't ...

P O E M it reads out poem. OH!!! I'm sorry iCarlyfan, I never noticed. I guess I should pay a bit more attention while going on a reviewing spree, ...

Kalyug The skies darken[s],[/s] As the sun dies. Up in the heavens[s], [/s] The angels cry. The earth burns[s], [/s] In the flames of hell. This day would come, Who ...

Kalyug- doesn't say anything about what you are trying to tell the reader Spike explained that in this topic, look it up :arrow: "Well ancient hindu saints divided time into ...

Lol...thanks for review, when I finish the poem, I'll PM you to review more-now you got to do that. Haha!

Oh, and fix punctuation.

Hm. That's about it. Again, just see if any of my suggestions could enhance the quality of your poem. I hope you'll take some into consideration for merely the sake ...

Yeah, all my reviewes are kinda harsh, but that's just me. There are many others who don't agree with me and that's fine.

'he' is a mystery, ... Thought so.