darkfictionboys

hey, d.f.b. here. i liked this story. it showed how a simple thing as a very very fine car can make people compete. i like the description of the car. ...

hey, d.f.b. here. welcome noob!!! hope you enjoy your stay at the yws! i loved how you wrote this. the comparisons and words you used to articulate your thoughts were ...

hey, d.f.b. here. loved this!! i think your view as a child was good. it was really sad when her mama died though. but the work here was good. very ...

hey, d.f.b. here. i love this story. i like the unique way that you had the MC talk, as if she was explaining what he did back to him. i ...

hey,d.f.b. here. i liked this story. it was good. like d.d. said, you don't give us to much, but its a prologue, so yeah. the whole abuse and running away ...

hey, d.f.b. here. i totally and completely understand where your coming from with the whole random thoughts thing. i have those all the time. and i can relate on how ...

hey, d.f.b. here. i liked this story. it was very nice. i liked how you made Taryn think that she still loved him. the last part where he threw her ...

gotta few questions here. who was the brat? and what was the package? how big was it? where was she besides a dark alleyway? besides these, i thought it was ...

d.f.b. here. this story made me cry. really, and i hardly ever cry. but this really got to me. i could imagine her feeling, the dream she had. this story ...

hey, d.f.b. here! i loved this piece. it was short, but you made it really good to make up for that. i could imagine the characters room, his house, his ...

hey, d.f.b. here. i liked this story, it was composed well, and i loved the concept. i just wished that you had described the imagery more. like what might grace ...

hello, d.f.b. here. okay, first off, i read one of the earlier versions, and i must say that you sure did move a lot of things around. i like this ...

hey kakagirl, its d.f.c., here to review! i did notice some little grammar mistakes, but its still a good story. you should try to portray how Serena felt deep inside, ...

hey ilovemyboys, i thought this story was absolutely wonderful in every way. well, except for the repetitive 'the way', i loved, loved, loved it!! i could seriously put my self ...

i liked it. i have dark times too, well actually, im always like that..... it expressed how you felt very well. now, i dont know if your supposed to adress ...