darkdove

I liked it but i was alittle everywhere. But thats why I like it!

thanx for ur comments and some of the grammar errors are on propose because thats how my main character's mind is.Like the "I"s I put them in lower case for ...

Revisions have been made and another part has been typed.

Thanx for ur comments...abhor means to like detest something or hate something

I liked it! It was very teenage but I like it. Its how i feel rght now. Keep it up because if this one of your first then show us ...

this was exetremely funny, it was like shrek but funny.

the story has been rewrittened completely...seriously so not the same story.

I like it, its realistic. I'm not going to spell check because well its a diary abd lots of people do that in there diaries. So if thats what you're ...

I like, its obvious to me that she's suppose to be spacy. And what person isn't? I would totally like to read more. I thought it was funny how she'd ...

I like this poem and there are some spell check issues...I have the same problem. lol I liked it :)

Its suppose to be like that its parallel structure. I like it the poem don't change anything.

i liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love how you write its amazing. Its like i was pulled into the story. I felt snow everywhere..this was awesome.

thanx everyone for your comments on this piece.

thanx i do it was just in a bitter mood...its out my system go on to things that matter thanx for posting.