dark_angel

Hi again! :D Okay, the only thing I have to say for this chapter is that I was really confused with the dialogue in the beginning. Nathaniel was called "Nat" ...

Hi there! I must say, this chapter seems to have been written in a hurry... there's a lot of detail packing without much filler. I know that's been said by ...

Hi there! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your poem today! ^^ So, I have a few things to point out about this. All in all, I agree with ...

Oh my gosh, Meep! Another exciting addition to this story that I would TOTALLY read if it was on a shelf somewhere. I'm following this so avidly, I'm beginning to ...

Hi there! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your poem today! :D So, to start things off, this was a very cute piece of writing. There are a few ...

Hi there! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your poem today. ^^ For starters, this is a wonderful piece of work! It left me speechless at the end, just ...

Hi there! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your poem today. >.< For starters, I'm not going to nitpick every little thing I find, because this is a VERY ...

Hi there! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your story today. >.< So, for starters, that was a wonderful beginning! I saw it on the front page, and it ...

Aww! That was so adorable! It takes me right back to fifth grade again, waiting on the sidelines for kickball. Hehe. :P Just thought I'd put in that I think ...

Hi there! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your work today. ^^ For starters, this is an amazing piece of writing! I was just scrolling along the front page, ...

Hi Macs! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your poem today. ^^ On the contrary, I think this is a wonderful piece of writing! It may need a little ...

Hi, Archer! I'm Dark Angel, and though most of the things I had to say are above, I thought I'd put in my two cents. >.< Anna, Alyson, and Hannah ...

Hi, Beemarie! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your poem today. ^^ So, to start this off, I definitely agree with jMin here. The lines don't need to be ...

Hi, Xavier! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your poem today. (: So, to begin with, I thought this was amazing. It perfectly describes those pointless crushes on the ...

Hey, Helen! I'm going to critique your poem today. ^^ For starters, this is an incredibly emotional piece of writing. It just sucked me right in and made me think. ...