dante93

This poem was amusing, but really very weak. I see in it no imagery that stands out, nor anything particularly great about it. Feathers, fur, hoofs, feelers, red, blue, purple, ...

I think the other reviews have already covered what needs to be revised and changed, but as a not the use of more periods in the first stanza would make ...

I agree with bookworm. This poem was very interesting in the way it was presented and the idea was very intricate and eerie. Not a particularly long poem, but to ...

I had deep connection to this poem because as I read I remembered what it was like moving from Italy to America. This poem captures in a very unique and ...

I see what you mean when you say the rhythm is not very strong, but I see the insight and potential of this poem. It seems a bit informal to ...

I agree with LastPaladin. Not to say that this idea is not a good one, but the way it is presented has no substance. It is like a weak speech ...

On some level I agree with Explosive_Pen, but this is a poem. It is a simple poem driven by pure hatred and emotion, but a poem nonetheless. It is simple ...

I thought this poem was a bit bland for my taste, but it could be great. I agree with what some of the others said about the abstract imagery. It ...

I agree with Juniper in that this poem does not move the reader very much. I have had this said to me before and it really helped, you have a ...

I like this poem. Granted it seems to be lyrics to a songs I rather enjoy it. I have felt that desire, that, and longing to have someone, to hold ...

I fall into a world that doesn’t want to catch me It blackens as it fades away Leaving just traces of hope and love Speaking of words no one wants ...

I see what the other two were talking about here. The poem overall is great, but there are a few words that need to be looked at such as cries ...

I think this poem is sweet as well, but there is one thing. The last two lines seem out of place. Just don't forget that love is my drug And ...

I agree this poem is great. I would not have changed anything about it either except for one line. "Robed forms wrought in panes of glass loom as" I would ...

Some of the greatest poetry ever written have had rhymed then stanzas with no rhyme, first. The poem itself was good, not one of the greatest, but good. I agree ...