danipower0204

Wow, this is a tragic, tragic tragedy. Holy damn. That's all I really have to say. You don't need to edit this in my opinion. The simplicity of words fits ...

Well, I guess that's it then. And I also guess you can write poetry. Well done.

Nicely written. If only I could have written poetry when I was 17, and as good as that, too. You sure are gonna be the teacher's favorite! Better watch out!

Thanks guys!

Why is this on the front page?

Thanks for the replies guys!

Thanks for the reviews, I really appreciate them. Desire and ally1212 the first stanza is now changed, and I have also added a stanza, plus the second "infinite" is now ...

I like it. The second stanza's rhyme seems a little forced, but that's about it (hold, told). Other than that, I really liked this little piece. Good job and good ...

Damn, this was a good piece. I was just about to click "back", but then it dawned on me. This was a very good piece, well done and continue writing ...

Thanks for the reviews guys. Really appreciate them

There's nothing to be reviewed here. It hit me like a rock on my chest. And those are the best poems. Good flow, good rhythm, good rhyme, wonderfully tragic story. ...

Thanks a lot for the reviews! I cannot change the first word of every line, as it is an acrostic, but I will work on the flow!

Thanks for all the great responses guys! Really appreciate it!

Thanks for the review! I appreciate it a lot!

Thanks for the responses guys! Really appreciate it!