dahlia58

Please correct me if I'm wrong, but I feel that this poem is about a love that has ended. And in a painful ending at that. The speaks seems to ...

This poem is beautiful.^^ I live in an area with a lot of forests, so I can relate to this work very much. There's something, as you put it, otherworldly ...

This is amazing! I could practically see the characters and the "mademoiselle" going about their daily lives right in front of me. The imagery and descriptive vocabulary used in this ...

Please correct me if I'm wrong...But this poem sounds like a description of suicidal tendencies. Either that, or the speaker is planning to murder someone else. Indeed, having to choice ...

Indeed, anyone would be furious in this situation. This poem is concise enough to convey the speaker's anger perfectly. Long, artsy phrases aren't necessary to express feelings. Of course, the ...

This is wonderful! Your descriptions of the setting and characters are very realistic (I understand this is fantasy story however). I'm fond of Steni already. She's so tough and impressive, ...

Ouch. This poem hits home so hard it hurts...Good criticism is absolutely necessary for every work, script or not. But it sucks when people keep pointing out the flaws and ...

This is deep (please forgive my choice of words). "I'll always be your father, and no matter what you've done you'll always be my son" really struck. I can't imagine ...

I loved the stong imagery used in this poem. I can practically see the waking-up-in-the-morning scene unfold in front of me. My favorite part is the "muscles tense and release" ...

This is an incredibly touching poem. Indeed, love is a sweet sorrow that most humans can't fully live or grow without. Personally, I do believe there are exceptions to this ...

I love this poem! So I'm not the only one who thinks night-time isn't that frightening. "The lord of the dark" line was my favorite out of this poem. I ...

I admit, when I saw this poem at first glance, I thought it was a poem on a haunted house. Every stanza of this work feels like the beginning of ...

"I waited, and waited, to be filled." I can sense the despair and sadness in these three lines. The entire poem itself paints an image, to myself at least, of ...

I can almost see the romantic longing present in this poem. What I found most interesting is that fact you refer to whatever has lead the speaker to fall in ...

I can practically see Maggie_Doodle running about in front of me. She sounds just adorable, but it would be tough work cleaning up after her mess, wouldn't it? Still, I ...