dahlia58

What a beautiful world your world is.^^ I like the strong nature-related imagery you've used throughout the work. I especially like the second-to-last stanza, where you compare the coming and ...

This is a really good poem. The "blood-spattered graffiti" and the "story of a people failed" lines really bring out the poor state of the "rebels." Indeed, blood stained artwork ...

Darkness within the speaker in this poem is being strangled by her own dreams and her unwillingness to see them through? That is a common problem among people nowadays (nods). ...

This is beautifully written...And it's just as the speaker's in love with a drowned woman? And this poem doesn't adhere to a certain rhyming or stanza structure, correct? This is ...

At least Sofia has one friend in the house...Her mother doesn't seem to be loving, though since this the first chapter, I guess it's too soon to say. The only ...

Cute...I'm sorry. This was an enchanting intro, especially the prophecy. Everything about this preview felt so mysterious. The kingdom of cats is really, really a topic I'd love to explore ...

Oh, so is Jefferson the child with the prosthetic limb? Chris and Rachel really are kind children. I'm liking them more already.^^ And they're right. Everyone deserves a chance to ...

This is fun to read! A lame statement, I know...But it's hard to find works that are actually fun to read sometimes. I love the concept of "invisible" kids, really ...

Oh my. I've never drunk vodka before, but it sounds like an interesting experience. There are some grammatical errors throughout the poem, but I get the feeling they fit the ...

This was a very positive read.^^ Was this work meant to be a children's story? It is certainly good enough to educate young kids on how to appreciate themselves more. ...

Just how hard was that test...? Anyway, your writing style's great. It's simple, easy to follow, yet descriptive enough to formulate a good story. I find it interesting how the ...

I feel you (nods). Writing poetry is easy? I'd love to fling water on the idiot who said that to me a while ago. Composing prose is hard enough, but ...

This was a very somber poem (in a good way). Indeed, it's dangerous and unhealthy to be left alone with your own thoughts if you're feeling depressed. I noticed a ...

This is one of the scariest short stories I've ever read in my whole life. And it's written originally in Tamil? Amazing, you've managed to translate it so well. I ...

This was terrifying. In a good way. Religious fanaticism and blood sacrifices are most certainly under the "horror" category. I especially liked how you described Mary's death as her being ...