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Thank you so much for your review!!! It is very helpful and I really appreciate it. :D I'll try adding more as soon as I can think of something good ...

Thank you so much for your reviews! :D This line: You can never be done. means you can't be finished smiling. If anyone has any suggestions on what to reword/change ...

I love this poem! I think It's great. That is all I have to say. Keep up the great writing! :D

Thanks so much for the help guys.

Thanks so much for your reviews! :D I really appreciate it. Dreamwalker, I know the language I use in my poetry is rather simple, I do have a much wider ...

I like this poem. It's really good. I love the Idea of the secret stanza. Thats all I have to say. Keep up the great writing! :D

Thanks Matthews, your review wasn't harsh. It was rather helpful actually.

Thanks for the help guys! They are really helpful. And lilymoore, thanks for the dancing/jogging jelly beans. I love them. :D

Thanks for the comments! I really appreciate them. tinkembell, good idea. I think I can see where you're coming from. Thanks again guys! :D

I like this. If you wanted to, you could change the layout of this and turn it into poem. Well done and keep up the great work! :D

Aww, thanks guys!!!!

Hey guys! Thanks for the reviews, they are very helpful. :D

Thanks guys! I'll keep your suggestions in mind when I write another poem.

Hi tinkembell, I just have to say I love this poem. I don't usually like sad poems, but I love this one. That's all really. Keep writing! :D

Thanks guys. Tigersprite, I fixed the typo. Thats all it was, a typo, I didn't mean to miss-spell it.