It's just a baby poem, please don't kill it. 
The glow of the moon calls to me
Like no other thing.
I contemplate escape
But there is no escaping
The night calls me
To its darkest depths,
Like a master and his dog
Playing a game of fetch.
I wish I had the courage
To do the unexpected,
But instead all I do
Is say what's scripted.
There once was a time
When I was considered the problem
Now the problem
Is that I listen to all of them.
I was pulled from my life.
Now I'm boring and weak.
Now people ask
What happened to me?
My nature days are over.
Now I'm all concrete.
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I just got chills... it was so simple and plain but yet flowed so well and got the message through without sinking to any deeper depths an yeaah.. L O V E;d it
One little nitpick though; you wrote "There once was I time" I think you meant A time.. not I time.. right?
My favorite part was
"I wish I had the courage
To do the unexpected,
But instead all I do
Is say what's scripted."
I can really relate to that part xD
Ehm... I want to say something helpful but there's not much to say other than I loved it so.. GREAT WORK and KEEP WRITING!
// Demoness
that ending is really great, the line drawn between nature and concrete... I loved that!
actually the whole poem was great. It flows naturally, good job.
That was really easy to read. I really like it. It flows wonderfully. I sort of wish I was the one that had written it. Haha. So in other words, great job.
I love this poem! I think It's great. That is all I have to say. Keep up the great writing!
I love it! it's one of those poems that's so easy to read! great fluency! I really like this segment the most-
"I wish I had the courage
To do the unexpected,
But instead all I do
Is say what's scripted."
Even if it is a 'baby poem' it's really good, and i like it!