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This was indeed kind of rude.

Hi, traveler! I like how you wrote in second person; it's not a commonly used tense. I've only read one novel written in second tense before. It feels like I'm ...

There's something about this piece that is so raw and moving. It's believable and convincing. Good job on capturing the realism of life. I really hope this wasn't from personal ...

:D

Very cute. I love how I can feel the anxiety and how nervous the narrator in this poem where the words aren't even mentioned. Your description is awesome. The flow ...

I love the way this poem flows.

Poetry is not my expertise, but the rhyming here feels a bit forced. Try to find a way to make the rhyming more organic if possible.

I dare you to do this in real life at least once in your life. xP

I really like the way this reads; your use of language is so elegant. My favorite lines are 1 and 5. There's missing punctuation on third line. :/ (A winter ...

Hello there. I love the symbolism/metaphors in this poem. It was lovely. Hope the writer's block stays away! (not here to review)

Grammar: Since her death, the start of every Spring broke my heart. Shouldn't be capitalized. He and I were separated by some imagined wall from since I could walk or ...

This is beautiful. It's a very original and heartfelt love poem. (Not here to review)

This was for the Big Random Story contest, so I don't know if I'm allowed to edit it and I have exactly 1000 words. :/

The shopping district was gloomy and only its lights made its sufferable. Typo. You added an extra "s" in "its".

All I have to say is, "beautifully written".