Hollow

by Azzy

Published April 2, 2012


Hollow eyes

Hollow face

What happened to your grace?

Once strong

Now weak

Now your aging bones do creak

Fingers tremble

Fingers shake

Until the day you do not wake
 
You used to smile


Now you frown


Father Time has let you down

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crescent commented Comment · Apr 5, 2012

I love the way this poem flows.

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thefrankie commented Comment · Apr 3, 2012

I loved it, Az. The wording was great.



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