Hollow

by Azzy
  • April 2, 2012
  • Poetry
  • Romantic

Hollow eyes

Hollow face

What happened to your grace?

Once strong

Now weak

Now your aging bones do creak

Fingers tremble

Fingers shake

Until the day you do not wake
 
You used to smile


Now you frown


Father Time has let you down

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crescent commented · Thu Apr 05, 2012 12:49 am

I love the way this poem flows.

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thefrankie commented · Tue Apr 03, 2012 8:32 pm

I loved it, Az. The wording was great.



If you can't describe what you are doing as a process, you don't know what you're doing.
— W. Edwards Deming