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Re: The Exchange Student, Chapter 2
The line is dead? That’s great. Now how is Mia going to get help? The only questions a 911 dispatcher is supposed to ask are what happened in the crime ...
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Re: Sincerely, Yours-Chapter two: Every Rose Has Its Thorn
Nakata seems like the type of person who prefers to be left alone. If Herbert really loves her, then he would respect that. I’m sure that he just has a ...
Oct 10, 2023 -
Re: The Exchange Student, Chapter 1
Hello! I’ve come to review your story. :> I like the mystery that’s there so far. It’s strange, how the boys are getting kidnapped and killed. On top of that, ...
Oct 9, 2023 -
Re: The Lurking Temptation
I definitely got creepy/obsessive vibes from this poem. I have not read the books or listened to the song, but I will do so. It feels like the stalker has ...
Oct 8, 2023 -
Re: thesweetness&thelight
I like the descriptive words in the poem. How you describe the pure elation of true love. The first time with romance is always the sweetest, the most cherished. It ...
Oct 7, 2023 -
Re: Lily's Pond
Sooo romantic and magical! I love how Lily and the pond are connected, similar. It brings light and mystery to the romance with the teens. Both have more to them ...
Oct 6, 2023 -
Re: Chapter 4: Your World ( part 1)
Noooo…. poor siren. She and her people were all cursed. I know that Thalia said that their looks would be cursed, but I think that the siren is beautiful in ...
Oct 6, 2023 -
Re: Chapter 3 : From Me To You
At this point I’m praying for their relationship to go well. They’re so wholesome and perfect for each other. :> It’s true love at its finest. I don’t think that ...
Oct 4, 2023 -
Re: Chapter 2 : My You
It’s been awhile since I’ve read the first chapter (sorry about that) but now I’ve come to read the second chapter! I like how excited the siren is. It’s the ...
Oct 3, 2023 -
Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 18
I feel bad for Rei. She cares about all of them and only wants the best for the group. I don’t blame her for not trusting Keith. Keith and Rei ...
Oct 1, 2023 -
Re: Not My Circus: Chapter 17
The part with Keith tip-toeing had me laughing! I could imagine it perfectly in my head. The spaceship seems really homey for a spaceship. I like that! :> Sooner or ...
Sep 30, 2023 -
Re: Colored in Light
Beautiful and tragic. Marisol gave up Earth to set Julia free. True love at its finest. Is it possible that dying in space sounds more macabre than dying on Earth, ...
Sep 29, 2023 -
Re: The Unnamed Poem
I see this poem as someone with a big heart who loves all people dearly. The person cries because they feel intense amounts of frustration and sadness, but also because ...
Sep 28, 2023 -
Re: The End of the World
This is my first time reading a script and I have to say, I like it. Why would Landon do such a thing as kill his parents? There must have ...
Sep 27, 2023 -
Re: The Darkness
That ending was so sweet…I loved it. It seems like there is only Hell that awaits, until that one person shows up to help you out. It is hard for ...
Sep 26, 2023
