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Re: A nighttime blur said 'free us from the writing article'
Cool poem! This seems like the kind of thing that would be in a positive poetry book.I love reading these favorite lines in the poem are:”Let us dream in our ...
Sep 25, 2021 -
Re: Your Beauty
Lovely poem! I love the message you’re giving us,the readers.That we are beautiful no matter what.It’s beautiful and favorite parts of the poem are these lines:”Find a mirror” and “Not ...
Sep 24, 2021 -
Re: The Stinging Tang
Cool poem! I believe this is about leaving and the scent of home never leaving favorite parts in the poem were these lines:”The night is gone” and “the waking death” ...
Sep 23, 2021 -
Re: nightingales
I enjoyed this poem.I loved the message of how life can be reborn from the ashes and destruction of only we helped the world favorite parts were these lines:”We may ...
Sep 22, 2021 -
Re: Your Grave is Empty.
I liked the poem.Anything a that has to do with graves or just had that Halloweenie feel to it,then,I’m going to read seems to me that the narrators feels grief ...
Sep 21, 2021 -
Re: I am the Invisible
What a lovely expresses the loneliness of not being noticed,yet,not knowing how to break it,because it’s so easy to live by favorite parts were these lines:”Because I am a ghost ...
Sep 20, 2021 -
Re: All-American (Witch) Girl:Two
I don’t know if you remember me,but I commented on your last story about Minnie.I’m liking this story about the witch girl so far and I’m excited to see it ...
Sep 19, 2021 -
Re: Lost time
I loved this poem.I like to read these types of poems,talking about love and time.There is a certain magic to it and that’s what this favorite parts in the poem ...
Sep 18, 2021 -
Re: Missing you in Maine
I like this poem and the meaning of missing someone so favorite lines were at the start of the poem:”..I started writing this poem.I wanted to write that you were ...
Sep 17, 2021 -
Re: Tree War
This was a very interesting story.I could see this as a Disney animation.I loved how you humanized the birds,it really makes the story more fun,to imagine them wearing pajamas and ...
Sep 16, 2021 -
Re: benevolence
Lovely poem.I love it the message that you are giving us,that maybe the god (or gods) are showing kindness to us by giving us the simplest things in life,like trees ...
Sep 15, 2021 -
Re: [Light floods in- - -]
This poem was short,but sweet.Now,the lights could mean anything.They could be taken literally,as in actual lights or they could be the small glimmer of hope that is in everyone’s life,which ...
Sep 14, 2021 -
Re: An Odyssey of Love
What a beautiful poem! Your description beautifully explains perfectly the meaning of love and how it can change us for the favorite lines were these last ones:”The water was honey,sugar ...
Sep 13, 2021 -
Re: The Years of the Morning Light (Prelude)
I wonder what will happen with Jina and Chiku.This is an exciting story and I can't wait for it to continue! My favorite part was when they accidentally bumped into ...
Sep 12, 2021 -
Re: All-American (Witch) Girl: One
I love reading about witches,magic and mayhem,So,I'd thought I'd give this story a try.I liked it so far.I can't wait to see what happens to Minnie and what will become ...
Sep 11, 2021
