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Re: jupiter wishes
This poem is so gorgeous. :0 I can see the stars and solar system with the words written in this. It’s like the whole solar system is sparkling. I think ...
Oct 29, 2022 -
Re: Swashbucklers (Prologue)
Dang. Poor Adam Rivera. :( He’s lost connection with his daughter and he’s teaching a bunch of losers. What a shame… or is it? You said in the blurb that ...
Oct 28, 2022 -
Re: Shadows
Whoa. :0 Spookyyy! I’m excited to read this series. I at first thought that this was going to be horror, because of the title and what I read, but I ...
Oct 27, 2022 -
Re: a too-hot shower
The “too-hot” shower, as told in this poem, is the blurred world in which the narrator is forced to hide in because a certain person changed them beyond recognition. Or ...
Oct 26, 2022 -
Re: Hellscape/Garden of Eden
The “Hellscape”, as described in the poem, is the industrialized world, the future. The “Garden of Eden”, is nature, coming down with its soft, gentle rain. This poem, I believe, ...
Oct 25, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Six
They’re calling Beatrice a witch? I thought that the whole lot of them were witches. I guess not. Goodness, it feels like everyone hates Kim and that’s not fair to ...
Oct 24, 2022 -
Re: fear in Red Underline
Whoa. I really liked this poem and the intentional errors. :0 It shows that the narrator isn’t thinking clearly. Their mind is in a haze of fear and desperation. And ...
Oct 23, 2022 -
Re: Autumn Flame
This is so wholesome! Opening up takes trust and time. Your heart will figure out when it’s right. I absolutely adore the autumn scenery! I can smell the pumpkin spice ...
Oct 22, 2022 -
Re: kindred
Very dark. :0 I like it. It’s final. This family is done. When the narrator of the poem dies, all traces of their family will be gone. Every. Single. One. ...
Oct 21, 2022 -
Re: Cycling
Cycling through life. Reaching to the top. Climbing through the mountain. Braving through the terror. When you reach the top, you find the cool wind and spectacular view. Yes, life ...
Oct 20, 2022 -
Re: It's Nothing
When all is left in the mind but nothingness, it is when the prettiest of ideas will come about. If one will allow them to come about, then all will ...
Oct 19, 2022 -
Re: i wish my youth would last just one heartbeat longer
Such a pretty poem speaking the truth about growing up! It’s like you are expected to know everything and be ready for all that the real world will bring, yet ...
Oct 18, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Five
So the reanimated are never quite alive? They’re just monsters? How sad. Imagine all the people who were wonderful in life, but reduced to skeletal creatures in death. I have ...
Oct 17, 2022 -
Re: credit card applications as a metaphor
The real world looms and taunts us once we are thrown into the open. Credit cards, like life, promises many things for us, but can we obtain those things? Are ...
Oct 16, 2022 -
Re: the art of decomposition
I really enjoyed this poem! I like how you write that decomposition is the emotions that can kill. Like decomposition, overwhelming emotions can destroy someone from the inside-out, making them ...
Oct 15, 2022
