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Re: mid-autumn
The narrator wants true, honest love, which means telling their partner when they are in the wrong and sometimes feeling hatred for them. But everything is hidden under smiles and ...
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Re: Two Rondeaus
Eating slugs:A young boy crushes hard on one of the girls. She is the only thing on his mind . His friends grow annoyed with him. They dare him to ...
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Re: Narcissus
This shows that maybe Narcissius is aware of his curse and is aware that what he’s doing is wrong, but can’t help the vain desire to just stare and stare ...
Sep 23, 2022 -
Re: Burning the Tear Flower
Very eerie..never go against the wishes of those you love, or they will come back to haunt you. Silas should have burned her body like she asked him to. I ...
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Re: The Bakery
Whoa, whoa, WHOA! That went from zero to one hundred real quick. I liked it. I have a few questions, though. How is the narrator telling the story? Did they ...
Sep 21, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Two, Part One
Oh goodness…She’s sending Kim far, far away, to the house of crazies! Maybe her Dad is one of them. Maybe he (whoever he may be) is a necromancer and she’s ...
Sep 20, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter One
Kim has brought back a bunch of dead frogs? What will she do next? Suppose her powers get out of hand? What if her Dad is dead and she brings ...
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Re: a wild woman, a burning stake
Who was the Great-Grandmother, exactly? A wild woman or a woman who followed her dreams? That is left for us, the reader, to decide. This poem was deliciously dark and ...
Sep 18, 2022 -
Re: exfoliation
The individual tries desperately to rid their face of any blemishes, to show that they can be beautiful in this cruel world. Beauty isn’t just a desire, it’s a need. ...
Sep 17, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 15
I saw that you wrote this entry in 2020. I have no idea if you intend to continue this series. If you do, then I hope Luke is let out ...
Sep 16, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | 13 2/2 and 14
Goodness! I thought that Luke was turning to the dark side for a moment. The I just said sounds like I’m talking about Star Wars if taken out of context. ...
Sep 15, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 13 1/2
So Layla got accepted into a fashion university? Things are looking up for the L family. Luke and Lily are heirs to the throne. Layla is going to a fashion ...
Sep 14, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 12
WHOA! Luke and Lily are heirs to the throne? That was totally unexpected. The Queen seemed nice, so why was she upset with Ashley? Because she was breaking the rules? ...
Sep 12, 2022 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 11
Does Lily know that Ashley is the diary girl? Will everyone find out what Luke and Lily are secretly doing? Will they be horribly punished? Will they be cursed? I ...
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Re: Fairy Diary | Day 10
Lily is just lonely? Ashley doesn’t talk to her? Hold on. If Ashley was turned into a diary a long time ago, she might be in a different grade than ...
Sep 11, 2022
