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Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Four
Goodness! Kim just ran away from her Grandma and is now lost in the woods! Will she be able to escape? Or will she become rodent food? What if there ...
Oct 10, 2022 -
Re: Halloween with Snoink, Grif, Edward Cullen, and Bulbasaur
This was hilarious! Oh boy, where do I start? Is it the fact that Bella’s love (excuse me, obsession) is on point? Or the fact that the Author (whoever they ...
Oct 9, 2022 -
Re: Movie Recs
Honestly I feel the same way about movies. No one will understand how I feel about the wondrous beauty that is known as films. I like how it seems like ...
Oct 8, 2022 -
Re: The Sunny Day
Haha! Cute poem. The sun knows that it’s an important source to bring joy. Who knows? Maybe it will, ”Brighten someone’s day!” I am one of those people who prefer ...
Oct 7, 2022 -
Re: Song
This is an interesting little thing that you wrote. The title is “Song” and the actual writing piece talks about being afraid of the end. Could it be that the ...
Oct 6, 2022 -
Re: Selling happiness
This story was very meaningful. Cehyn works to make the lives of others better, but in the end, she is only human. She cannot cure everyone. It is up to ...
Oct 5, 2022 -
Re: Emotions
This poem was so cute! I like how the message leads to a point where one must be careful with someone so that they don’t let their emotions change them ...
Oct 4, 2022 -
Re: Day One Hundred and Twenty One Thousand
1000 years of no dying? Pure perfection? Somehow, that’s even worst than the flaming pits of Hell! I like how this poem describes a perfect world where even vomiting is ...
Oct 3, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Three, Part One
Well, it looks like it will take a while for Kim to adjust, but hopefully she’ll get the hang of it. Hopefully. My favorite part would have to be near ...
Oct 2, 2022 -
Re: robin wings made of wax
Hello! I think that this poem nicely portrays Tim’s angst towards his role as Robin. My favorite lines were ”because what is life in this dark city without your light?” ...
Oct 1, 2022 -
Re: gotham's forbidden garden
Harley Quinn and Poison Ivy? A beautifully unholy match made in Hell. I love how you made it seem like even if things don’t work out, Ivy will still be ...
Sep 30, 2022 -
Re: unmoored
Hello! I’ve come to review your poem. First thing I want to say is WOW. I love how it feels like the girl is lost and trying to find her ...
Sep 29, 2022 -
Re: Roaring Flames, Heathen Night
I liked how you wrote this poem. It feels like the introduction to an epic fantasy series and I really enjoy reading fantasies. You can feel the determination in this ...
Sep 28, 2022 -
Re: Hypoxia
Hello! I’ve come to review your story. First off, I would like to mention how much I love the creepiness of it. The idea that a party literally kills toy ...
Sep 27, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Two, Part Two
I have no idea if Beatrice or Amelia should be trusted. Amelia didn’t even explain things to Kim. She just sent her to the mysterious Beatrice. If I’m not mistaken, ...
Sep 26, 2022
