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Re: Take me Home
Home is where the heart is and the heart was in the treehouse, with nature. Away from the hubbub of humans and all around them. In the cool of night, ...
Nov 13, 2022 -
Re: Home
The heart is lost and can’t find a home. It has lost the touch for love and needs to be loved once again. It has been forgotten and covered in ...
Nov 12, 2022 -
Re: Mr. Mayor
Hmmm… Mr.Mayor seems very suspicious. He’s hiding something. Is Madam Mayor even telling us the truth? How much is being told? What are all of the lies? Who knows where ...
Nov 11, 2022 -
Re: my favorite book
This poem tells of being with a friend all the way through, no matter what, because you care about them. I like how you say that your favorite book is ...
Nov 10, 2022 -
Re: Conversations Meant To Be Forgotten
I like how the subject of the conversation keeps changing, as if years were passing in between them. I also like the jar with the glowing branches. It’s really pretty ...
Nov 9, 2022 -
Re: Describing the sky
Funny and cute! There are a lot of poems describing how “blue and beautiful” the sky is, but do people even realize that the sky isn’t always blue? Here are ...
Nov 8, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Eight
Is there a potential friendship between Kim and Jasmine? Perhaps. And why on Earth would Jasmine take Kim to her house? Shouldn’t she have left Kim for Beatrice to find ...
Nov 7, 2022 -
Re: Sorrows of the Deep
This… is beautiful. I take it that everyone is a merperson? Cool! You would like to think of what happens next? Well, you could have the thing show itself to ...
Nov 6, 2022 -
Re: In the Dark 2/2
Oh man… this got dark. Why did the protagonist kill Audrey? Was it really Alex the whole time, knowing that something was up? Will Alex and Chris become the smiling ...
Nov 5, 2022 -
Re: In the Dark 1/2
What is this place? What is the monster? Why do they go into the dimension if there’s danger? Something happened with Chris’ Mom for sure. Maybe that thing took his ...
Nov 4, 2022 -
Re: Buried in the Blue Unknown (2)
Already Maysi decided that they’re never going home? What? Why? They’re just going to stay in that strange land forever and they’ll never see Sully or anyone else ever again? ...
Nov 3, 2022 -
Re: Buried in the Blue Unknown (1)
And now comes the best part! When Adam and Maysi drift off through a portal to another world! I don’t think that the pool had a drain in the first ...
Nov 2, 2022 -
Re: Pale brightness of the Moon
How beautiful and sorrowful. The pale brightness of the moon which once brought a calm into the air now only brings fear. The white glow of the hazy moon now ...
Nov 1, 2022 -
Re: The Ten-Year-Old Necromancer: Chapter Seven
WHAT??! Someone screamed?!! Somebody Kim knows, and you’re just going to leave us in cliffhanger like that?!! That’s criminal! (It’s a joke by the way). This brought us more insight ...
Oct 31, 2022 -
Re: that night
It seems like it’s about one single night that changes everything. The night when truth is revealed. It’s lost love and lonely nights. I liked the dark and romantic tone ...
Oct 30, 2022
