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Hello there! First off, I really like this poem. Bad dreams are something that I have a huge issue with, so I could totally identify with you when I read ...

Hello there!!! First off, this poem is amazing. You truly did a wonderful job expressing your thoughts in words that aren't everyday while not making it overly wordy. That's a ...

Hello there! First off, welcome to YWS. I hope you like it here as much as I do! If there's anything that I can help you with, just ask and ...

Hello there!!! First off, I love the feeling of this poem. It's almost the feeling I get when I'm reading a book that was written a long time ago, like ...

Have you ever heard of a little thing called plagiarism? Because that's what you've done here. I am a huge fan of a band called Breaking Benjamin. They have a ...

Hello there! The first thing I noticed about this story was the way that all of your sentences blended together, but not in a good way. The reason for this ...

Hello there! First off, I'd like to say that you have the potential for a great story here. Characters must be highly motivated in order to make the book interesting, ...

Hello there!! First off, I just want to say that I'm a fan of short poems if they're done very well. For me, if a poem is going to be ...

Hello there!!! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here as much as I do. If you've got any questions, feel free to ask and I'll help ...

Hello there!! First off, I'd just like to say that this piece has quite a bit of potential. With a little bit of editing, I feel like it could be ...

Hello there! First off, I think that this is an awesome piece. The overall message that you portray is one that I think practically everyone can identify with: the want ...

Hello there!! I absolutely love this poem! I completely understand the emotions that are presented in it and love the moral of the story that you tell. I have absolutely ...

Hello there!!! First off, I think that this piece has quite a bit of potential. There are some elements of it that I absolutely adore, and others that I'm not ...

Hello there!! First off, what you were writing about in this poem was very touching. I think that expressing this story in a poem was an awesome choice. That being ...

Hello there! I love the subject of this poem. I'm not sure if you've read Charlie and the Chocolate Factory by Roald Dahl, but this poem brought to mind the ...