creativemuse1

This is a really good poem. I gag, "love, kiss, touch"to your earrings, your ears are reserved for needles skipping heartbeats on 45s. I just didn't quite understand this part.

His father had forgotten and his mother…well, she hadn’t been alive since he was born. A good story. But what does his father forget?

We all make grammer mistakes, including I. :D

Wow, that is a good story. So much emotions. I listened intently as boots clumped along the polished floor, and a soft wumph, as the seat beside my bed was ...

Just to say, like DakotaK pointed out, the first part was confusing. I think it is good.

I like this poem. It is really good and I agree with the grades part. Just saying. Anyway, good job.

This is a good poem. I like the ending. You showed emotions through your poem.

This is a good poem. I can read the emotions in it.

This is a good poem. I'm so sorry about your situation. That's sad. But I hope you are better now. Anyways, nice poem. I can read the emotions in it.

I like your poem. I agree with Sassykat, it needs more details. I, also, feel it repeats too much. "I wish I could tell myself" and etc. But that is ...

That was really good. It kept me interested. I really like this story. Sad at the end but good.

I think this is a very good poem. What you wrote is very true and real. Very good poem.

This is really good. I understand how you feel and what you are saying in your poem. You are trying to give people a message saying to them. Hatred, stereotyping ...

This is really good. You have some emotions in this poem. I like how the emotions show up in the poem especially at the end.

Awww. I know exactly what you are feeling. I really like this poem. It is soft and you tell the readers what you did and how you feel.