Published June 17, 2011
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
Awww. I know exactly what you are feeling. I really like this poem. It is soft and you tell the readers what you did and how you feel.
My favorite line is Stare into the mirror and wonder what I'd look like if I were a cartoon character. It was a nice, light, funny poem that wasn't too long or too short. I don't really see any spelling/grammatical errors. Well done.
This is funny. I like how you wrote that you were gonna write a poem on YWS and ended it with this poem about boredom
keep it up and summer is boring your not alone lol