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I liked it. A lot actually. To some people it may not make sense, but I understand where you were going with it. Well done. But you need to work ...

I like it, but... To me, it doesn't flow well. I don't know it may just be the way I read it, but it just doesn't seem to have that ...

I loved it. The flow and rhythm was super. I wanted to just keep reading and reading. I was sad when it ended. The imagery was amazing and took me ...

Wow, I'm speechless. I loved it so much. You're very talented. I don't know how you could make this poem any better than it already is. Way to go. Keep ...

Whoa, I absolutely loved it. It drew me in and definetely kept my attention. Which is kinda hard to do. haha. I don't have a very high attention span. I ...

Holy friggin' cow! That was the best poem I've read in awhile. I couldn't wait for more. The whole time I was intrigued. Your words fit perfectly with your emotion ...

Oh my gosh! I absolutely loved it and thought that it was fantastic. It gave me chills man. It was short and sweet and to the point, just what I ...

Oh my gosh, that is one of the best poems I've read on here. I think it was great and it left me speechless. I have nothing to correct you ...

Hi cap'n! :) Name's Ciara. I thought you're poem was excellent, and I loved it because it's something everyone goes through and I can relate to it. Other than a ...

I liked the fact that you did it that what, but I love it the way it is. I think you did amazing on it. It was short sweet and ...

I thought that all three were absolutely amazing, and there's nothing I would improve. Granted that's just my opinion, but.. Oh well. (: It's an opinion, it's just that, so ...

I agree with everyone. It sent a very strong message and I think that it was well done. You're an amazing writer even when it was late at night, but ...

Yeah, it's all up to you. If you like to rhyme, by golly, RHYME! If you don't, then don't. I really liked this poem, but "When I tore my lips ...

Sorry, If I seemed mean. I don't mean to be. I was just being honest. Like I said on your other post, Don't let me get to you. (: Sincerely, ...

I like the idea of it, but the format throws me off. The answer to the first question, I think you should find a different word for measurement, but that's ...