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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Scared

    This, like most other poems, didn't quite impress me due to how lame and generic it felt. Now, I'm not calling you lame, you still have a lot of potential, ...

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: September Eleventh

    Okay, cool, 9/11 poetry. Heavily indifferent on it because it's basically all the same thing, really. I didn't feel any strong emotions towards this because of how generic it felt. ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Satire Re: Dirty Knees, Cloudy Skies

    I actually liked this work, but I do think there are fields that you need to work on. I can tell you were probably trying to mimic the usual satire ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Anxiety

    I don't quite get the satire in this, all I really see is the attempt to be edgy, to be completely honest. This doesn't float my boat like it does ...

    Sep 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Dirty Skies, Cloudy Knees

    This is counterculture to the point where it isn't funny on purpose, more so I can laugh about how counterculture this is. It's pretty pointless, to be honest. Okay, cool, ...

    Sep 22, 2015
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: 'Til Death Do Its Part

    I didn't quite like this, though it did have some great elements. I felt, T times, that this was extremely silly and took away a good amount of the potential ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Review, Science Re: Logic: You Touch Everything

    Oh my gosh, this is genius! I absolutely love it because you prove everything wrong when people say "don't touch something". I love that fact of it. The writing was ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Dear Alexis

    Well, I don't try to be harsh, but I didn't like this. It was really harsh and I have a feeling this Alexis didn't quite deserve it. I feel like ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Dirty Knees, Cloudy Skies

    This was immature and I don't like how you formatted, though the idea was v nice. For example, you took the idea of "mirror mirror" which is a common staple ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Where I'm From

    I wasn't a fan of how you chopped this up. It was really awkward formatting that weighed this poem down heavily, which such a silly idea that seems ridiculous. It ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Health Re: I did it for you

    I wasn't a big fan of this, but the idea is v intriguing and could be expanded immensely if you took this to free verse. The rhyme really put mud ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: Thoughts; pronoun

    Absolute nonsense, I do not see the humorous appeal to this. I apologize if this isn't as quite professional as the other reviews, but I want to help. This senyru ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dirty knees, cloudy skies

    Was this a joke? I didn't understand it. It seems near unreal because you're talking about something that reviewers probably know nothing about. It seems too unprofessional and I can't ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dirty knees, cloudy skies

    I don't quite like this, to be honest. It feels generic and stereotypical to a T. You could improve on this as you do have some great potential but right ...

    Sep 21, 2015


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