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  • Lyrics » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Be The Same

    Hey, darkangel_05! CM here to review your lyrics. So, I'll start with the general message of the song. The first couple of verses where really good in the way that ...

    Oct 3, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: The Beast Within

    Hi there! CM here with your review (finally) First of all, I liked it. I liked how vivid your description was and how much imaginary and detail you managed to ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: Little Red Riding Hood ~A Children's Story?~

    Hi there! CM here for a review. Since you are the first person to ask for a review, I'll try to make this as detailed as possible. :D First of ...

    May 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Clown

    This is a really cool piece my friend! I liked the note, and the message it contained. It was quite creepy as well, and I think you used description well. ...

    May 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Clockturner-Part 1

    Hi Tabithalillian, CM here to to return the favor. First of all, I think that the description in this was awesome, you didn't overload it like most people tend to ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: December

    Hi Audy! I'm going to give your poem a crack at reviewing seeing it's review day! Like most of your pieces this is thoughtful and subtle, something I'm striving to ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Other » Fantasy, Culture Re: The Ant people of the dessert

    Hi there, Welcome to YWS! First of all, I think this has some potential. It was an interesting... Uh, what was it? :D Moving on, it was quite short. If ...

    May 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Guidance

    Hello! Welcome to YWS! I liked this a lot. Lot of emotion in it,which I really liked. I look up for my guidance, for looking down is surely a scornful ...

    May 20, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Action / Adventure Re: The Night Will Come.

    Hi there, CM here with a quick review. Welcome to YWS! (Late welcome :P) Since everyone else has avoided the hard stuff, I'm going to have to get down dirty ...

    May 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Unreadable

    Okey Dokey, CM here with a quick revieeweeeeeeew. First off, Welcome to YWS! I know you're going to enjoy it here, as I can already see potential blooming. Next. I ...

    May 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Wild Ride

    Hi ShadowVyper, CM here with a quick review. Firstly, I'll point out the positives. I'm going to give you a 9/10 for both imaginary work and lyrical flow. Beautifully done ...

    May 4, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hm....

    Hello there, CM here with a quick review :) First of all I liked this poem, a lot. Simple and not overloaded with heavy terms and meanings, it was a ...

    Apr 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Deathscape

    Hi, CM here with a short review. Over all I had mixed feelings. The descriptiveness and the certain mystery of it all entranced me to the very end. Well written ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: A Twisted Torture

    Hello there :) First of all, I was deeply and utterly entranced by this. Not in a good way, but in a horrible gritty way. Personally, I felt you achieved ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Other Re: Curse

    Hello there, CM here with a quick review. First off all, I liked it a lot, it reminded me of a prophecy... It flowed well and the rhymes went well ...

    Apr 18, 2013


Love is so short, forgetting is so long.
— Pablo Neruda