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Re: Christmas time.
God, (haha i feel a lil weird calling you that. :wink: ) I think you got my point exactly, even adding your own imagry in there. :) everyone - thanks, ...
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Broken Glass
Thanks Tim. =) "trickling over broken glass" is supposed to make you think of water. Maybe I didn't make that clear enough...? Also, I'm not going ot explain it...yet. I ...
Jan 15, 2009 -
Re: A Dream
Hi, I'm clue. =) This is a bit lacking in emotion. It's all a bit bland. Good try. I would suggest that you read some poetry from people like Snoink ...
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: I Lost You
This was good. You have a lot of talent. Way to go. =) Gold star. --mary
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
heh heh heh. =)
Jan 14, 2009 -
Re: Honestly Ugly
i like it a ton better. i would say its 99% better. very very very well done.
Jan 13, 2009 -
Re: lost in death
i like this one too. =)
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Christmas time.
:smt001
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: I Used To Fly
That was beautiful. You have loads of talent. No kidding. *Gold Star*
Dec 17, 2008 -
Re: Eagle's View
Thanks so much everyone!
Dec 13, 2008 -
Re: The Slaver
heh, how do i delete this?
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: The Slaver
Alright... thanks so much! I'm gonna get a few more reveiws, then I'll probably scrap it. But thanks. I tried. =) And I guess it was a learning experience.
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: καλοκαίρι
That was very confusing. Beautifull, but confusing.
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Get Out of the Water
That was good. =/ Yeah. TONS of emotion. Thanks, J. You just showed me what it's like to have the reader feeling it.
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Describe how a Christian may follow the call to...
Thank you. :wink:
Nov 19, 2008