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Hum Ho. This is decent. Good work. I don't know. It's a little...well...add some more description! I mean...this could be a great poem. Seriously. But you need to bring it ...

I looovee this poem!! (The forest) It's so sweet. =) Alright, now I'm going to critique it. But whatever I say, keep in mind that I LOVE it! The Forest ...

Good poem. Unlike many others, I didn't feel the emotion. But maybe I have too high standards.That part might just be me. Alright, no one else has given you a ...

can;t figure it out, sorry. I'm confused. Oh and b y the way it sorta turns people away when it's confusing and you say, "figure it out for yourself." =/ ...

Uhhm... I don't know...... Since you already had a grammatical crit I'll skip it.... but it does distract from the story. This was decent.... to tell ou the truth I ...

That was lovely. Here's an in detail critique, in case you want to improve. "Did you ever know that there was a journey to Forever? --was could be IS. That ...

JOCELYN!!!! you need to use this as your writing against Ty. clean it up a lil, revise it and this could be AMAZINGG!!!! I honestly think this is probably one ...

That was good! It was humerous and very light. A great think to perk up my day. =) Bravo. There were a few grammatical errors tha I'm sure you could ...

That was good. I think that it explains how a lot of people feel. If you're feeling this I'm really sorry for you. But back to the poem.... She cry’s…. ...

very good poem. very well done and i think you captured the picture perfectly. and i do not think its right to judge a poem on what its about. just ...

"For I am the way, the truth, and the life, no one can come to the Father except through me." If you believe in the bible, it shows that really, ...

nice poem. =) i think for this subject though, it really needs to stand out. there are sooooo many poems out there about relationships, love, etc. so if you ever ...

hmmm. this is a decent story. the problem i find with it, is that it's just like every other story about being in the ocean and having to get to ...

wow, i think the way you described the different feelings is really good. they bring the poem to life. Guilt comes in packages so very small. It makes no entrance, ...

haha i actually laughed when i read that. :D i think it's good. for being written at 1:00. there is a drastic change from funny to deep. but good effort. ...