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Re: stone wall
Hey, Elysium! cleverclogs here for a review! First of all, I love this poem. It really shows that you don't have to have lots of description and flowery language to ...
Nov 1, 2015 -
Re: A Haiku and Tanka
Hey, unluminescent! cleverclogs here for a review! So I've noticed in some of your responses to other reviews, you keep mentioning that everything is the way it is in these ...
Oct 26, 2015 -
Re: That Purposeful Rug
Hey there, Becky2421! cleverclogs here for a review! Well that ended up being much darker than I expected. In a good way, though. Spread skilfully Typo alert: "Skilfully" should be ...
Oct 18, 2015 -
Re: Dgfdfsg
Hey, winter257! cleverclogs here for a review! I guess I'll take this stanza by stanza, so here we go. America, America, land of the free Just not for those stuck ...
Oct 18, 2015 -
Re: Unnoticed
Hey there, TheRealOne! cleverclogs here for a review! This was a good sonnet. I liked the theme and the language you used, and you did a commendable job staying within ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Srgsrgrwg
Hi there, winter257, and welcome to YWS! cleverclogs here for a quick review! My main problem with this poem is that it's putting someone else down. I understand that the ...
Oct 12, 2015 -
Re: Guilt <3
Hi there, queenebea! cleverclogs here to review! I think that my main problem with this poem isn't the subject you chose, but the way you chose to portray it. The ...
Oct 11, 2015 -
Re: Sunset
Hello, ChocolateCello! cleverclogs here to review! Why is it that I'm totally unmotivated to review until I see that you've posted a work? This is a nice... snippet-thingy (I would ...
Oct 8, 2015 -
Re: Demons
*instantly begins humming the Imagine Dragons song* Hey there, CC! cleverclogs here for a quick review! I'm a little rusty, so bear with me. :D This is a pretty interesting ...
Oct 1, 2015 -
Re: Welcome to America
Hey, CC! cleverclogs here for a review! This is so true. We still have huge problems with all of these things. One of the previous reviews mentioned that homophobia isn't ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: First Day
Phee, Phi, Pho, Phum, we're going to review until you're numb! Hey there, ChocolateCello! cleverclogs here for a quick review in this final stretch of Review Day! This was a ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Self ish
Phee, Phi, Pho, Phum, we're going to review until you're numb! Hey there, DrWriter99999, and welcome to the wonderful world of YWS! cleverclogs here representing team Phi on this lovely ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Three Haiku, Nicol's version.
Phee, Phi, Pho, Phum, we're going to review until you're numb! Hey there, Nicol! cleverclogs here representing Team Phi on this lovely review day! So, the first thing I want ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Radical Kills [Chapter one: 'Deliberation']
Phee, Phi, Pho, Phum, we're going to review until you're numb! Hey there, KyotoMylo10! cleverclogs here representing Team Phi on this lovely review day! I do quite like your description ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Schizophrenia
Phee, Phi, Pho, Phum, we're going to review until you're numb! Hey there, Littleun! cleverclogs here representing Team Phi on this lovely review day! These are great song lyrics, as ...
Aug 30, 2015
