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Phee, Phi, Pho, Phum, we're going to review until you're numb! Hello again, Catlover211! cleverclogs here representing Team Phi on this lovely Review Day! Let's roll. This will probably be ...

Phee, Phi, Pho, Phum, we're going to review until you're numb! Hey there, PancakeandWaffle! cleverclogs here representing Team Phi on this lovely Review Day! First of all, this is suffering ...

Hello. cleverclogs here to sort of review your work, I guess. For review day. You know the drill. Moving on. I'm not quite sure what to make of this. I'm ...

Phee, Phi, Pho, Phum, we're going to review until you're numb! Hey there, roeckercody! cleverclogs here representing Team Phi for a Review Day review! I think that the main thing ...

Hey there, Pomp! cleverclogs here to save you from the Green Room! I've always loved your poetry, but I've always been somewhat shy about reviewing it because I feel like ...

Phee, Phi, Pho, Phum, we're going to review until you're numb! Hey-o, ChocolateCello! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review, representing the mighty team Phi! (same team you're representing, but ...

Phee, Phi, Pho, Phum, we're going to review until you're numb! Hey there, dec12! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review, representing Team Phi! A word of advice: If you ...

Phee, Phi, Pho, Phum, we're going to review until you're numb! Hey there, StagesofInsanity! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review, representing team Phi! (please note that I have written/typed ...

Yo, cnlng35. cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! Your main problem is your characters. The dad just seems like a crazy insane person with no depth other than anger. ...

Hey there, methrirr123! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! So, I get the feeling that the narrator is a ghost. Am I right? That's certainly an interesting perspective, and ...

Hey there, ryugemma! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! I think that the main thing this story suffers from is bad pacing. In my mind, we went from road ...

Hey there, Blogger101! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! First order of business: break up those enormous paragraphs. They're really hard to read and just generally unappealing to look ...

Hey there, Hamsa! cleverclogs here for a Review Day review! A few suggestions: 1. Right now, I see three big paragraphs. Try to break them up a little; it'll be ...

Hey, Hatt! cleverclogs here to help save your poem from the Green Room! Okay, as you can tell from my post below, I didn't understand this poem the first time ...

Hey, Sylar! cleverclogs here to review! This was really nice. I liked the sentimentality of it, and I also got a bit of a bittersweet vibe from it. There are ...