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Hi! Okay, I really liked this poem! It was so interesting how you communicated your story to the reader. Usually I don't like short stanzas, but I think you really ...

Hi! I'm just going to jump right into some grammar mistakes I noticed and see where it goes from there :). " you hurt me, yet its still love I ...

Hello, I liked the format of this piece a lot. I think the story was good, and overall an interesting topic to write about. None of your sentences we awkward ...

Hi! I'd like to start by saying that I really like this piece. I think you have really portrayed this person's emotions , be it you, a friend, or a ...

Hi there! Okay I loved the language you used in this poem, and the feeling that I got was really great. Seriously, this poem made me happy. It's so cute, ...

I really liked this piece. It has an interesting format. It feels like a really long riddle, and I guess I never really found the answer to it... but the ...

Beautiful poem. I really love the language you used and I just enjoyed reading it. Although it depresses me to say this: I almost never see anything like this on ...

Hi! I'd like to start out on a positive note, I love the idea of this story. Reading it was fun, and you really made the characters stick out. However, ...

Hi! I'm CJ! If you don't mind, I'm going to review this fabulous story. What I love about this story is not only the awesome descriptions (which I'll talk about ...

This an interesting piece of writing. I feel as though it have a real plot. Some pieces don't and that's fine, and I noticed this was marked as a chapter ...

I thought this story was overall really good, well written, and definitely heart-wrenching. I loved that you wrote it from the perspective of the park. It gave the story a ...

This poem is wonderful. I love the wording, it evokes a sort of nostalgia, and love. The reader can sense the careful piecing of the words that slowly create a ...

This poem is intriguing. I loved the imagery, and the twist at the end. It's beautiful in the way that it shows something ugly, and then something pensive. It got ...

This story, from the very beginning, captivated me. I loved this story because not only does every single one of us have a story, but none of us REALLY think ...