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Re: Silver Moon Beams
Dear felistia, I am so happy that you have managed to take my little snippet and turn it into something so beautiful! I'm glad that you were able to find ...
Nov 7, 2015 -
Re: sometimes
(just a quick note, sorry if my review is awful, or makes no sense) Dear savvy, I must confess, this is one of the best poems I have ever read! ...
Nov 6, 2015 -
Re: The Dawn of Time
Hey Amindor! I must say, I love your poem here! This is a topic I think a lot about, as depressing as it is, and I think you have done ...
Nov 2, 2015 -
Re: assigning meaning to something which has none
Dear penprincess, this free verse poem of yours is magnificent! You truly have talent as a writer! I am very fond of your imagery, and how the girl's reaction and ...
Oct 26, 2015 -
Re: Thoughts
Hi! Just a scrubby review from a scrubby reviewer! I saw this in the green room, and since I know how it feels to spend forevvveeerrr on something and have ...
Oct 23, 2015 -
Re: Dgfdfsg
Hi Winter257, I must say this is exquisite! I am very fond of your rhymes, and how you manage to use long words. (Go vocabulary expansion!) Most writers of poems ...
Oct 18, 2015 -
Re: Spring-Heel - Chapter 1, Part Two
Dear chaser, you truly have brought an urban legend to life! The tale of spring heeled jack that you have painted here is a magnificent one, and I am very ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Musical: The Play
Dear stranger, just let me say one thing here... Even though this story makes practically not freaking sense, I loved a great deal of it. I mean that makes. No. ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Glue
Dear MLanders, I must say, this is an interesting take on the traditional story of motherhood. You bring a sense of realism and the actual world to a picture that ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: The Flyers and Runners
Dear jumpingsheep, I must say this is a very interesting poem. I am not surewhat form you are trying to take here, is this a free verse, or a regular ...
Sep 25, 2015 -
Re: Red-Thread Doll
Dear artemis15sc, I must say your story here is very good, especially if this is your first time writing this sort of thing. Sorry if my review sucks. However, there ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: Dirty Knees, Cloudy Skies
Greetings Elysium, I must say this certainly is an interesting poem. I am fond of the way you made everything rhyme, and although I would like this to be a ...
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: Fuzz
I like your poem here, and I think you are using a topic that most people don't think much about. However you do have an error. You seem to be ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: deleted
Greetings eveningstar, I must say your poem is... strange... I am a Christian, so I am sorry if I am kind of writing apprehensivly here, or not analyzing your poem ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: The Queen of the Cogs
Dear steampowered, you are truly a master of your craft! I love this poem, for you have almost perfectly portrayed what it is like to be a queen of steam! ...
Sep 12, 2015
