chetanbhasin

Great! Your work is always like this, different. I liked it this time too. But there is one thing that I would say. See, at the end of your story ...

Good work! There are some typing errors in your writing though. Read it once again and I think you will be easily able to point them out. It is catchy ...

There are some things that I would recommend you to edit over here. Instead of Dark clouds hover above my head You can use "Clouds are dark, over my head" ...

Poem is good and emotions are well expressed, but there is one line that bothers me. I thought we were friends Until the world's end "Until the world's end" seems ...

Great work! You've explained the expressions and mind of your character very well though there are some errors that I will try to help you find out. Here it goes, ...

Haha thanks! Yes it is a short poem, because it is supposed to be short and to the point. And yes it is a rhyming poem, just the format doesn't ...

I agree with everybody else who made a review over here. But there are some things that I would like to tell you. First of all, as you already know ...

Doesn't seem like a blurb, it seems good though but there are some things that if you would edit will read better. I will go step by step: Red color ...

Hello possibleintrovert, Good job. You've expressed the emotions of the girl in a very good manner however story seems like 'incomplete'. Also, should be providing more about the main character ...

Hello bookgeek, However, your plot and idea is nice but there are some general mistakes. I am editing it and my edits and suggestions are in bold. Dear Dad, How ...

Hi! You've got a great sense of expressions which you explained well in your story. But in the starting and on some other places your words seem like changing into ...